this was such a great chapter, all the build up paid off so well here :)

and YESSS zuko is BACK with the fire

Gotta say I LOVED this chapter. The characterization is just fantastic.. This might be my favorite chapter yet, and i was thinking the ruins of omashu couldn't be beaten. it was super fun to see everyone react to their counterparts! the only weak area was the beginning dream sequence, not because its zutara, but i feel like its a little ooc. besides that, this chapter was amazing :)

everything in me wants to read about azula finding aang in the of world and facing of azula. but, I love the way the fic ended. i think it's beautiful how we have just a glimpse of hope (wink) at the end, letting us know it'll prob be ok. i only started reading this about a month ago, and tbh it's the only second book (this is def book level for me) ever! english isn't my first language lol
thank you, I enjoyed this story so so so much!3

Wow

I found out about this story last week from a random Reddit post, and I’ve been binging it nonstop. What an incredible journey it’s been. Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with the world. I really like how everything just made sense within the internal logic of the story.

I also really like the open ended nature of the epilogue. Azula is on her way to save Aang’s world, via the tree of time. Not just for him, but because she feels like she can make a difference. And since it seems like Aang and all of his friends have no memory of the time spent in Azula’s world, I remain so so curious as to how their reunion could possibly go. Would the others begin to remember the events of her world? Would only Aang? Would none of them remember their time in the other world and Aang would need to get to know Azula from scratch? Heck, maybe even Azula would forget the details due to the dimensional travel and they’d be able to fall in love as freshly met comrades fighting against the fire lord and phoenix king (despite his initial suspicions of Azula sharing the same face and name as the fire lord, he’d quickly realize just how different this Azula is… Or maybe she’d take the cautious route and wear The blue demon mask during her attacks on the fire lord and whilst joining up with the Gaang…). The mind boggles at all the possibilities here, and I could easily visualize a story arc for each of those pathways. Yes, the world is in a bleak state. Many beloved characters are dead. But hope springs ever eternal. They’ll bring peace to the land, and they’ll be able to rebuild and regrow, eventually.

I really loved how you jumped POV between so many characters, giving us a real perspective into how they feel and perceive the world. Especially in the last dozen chapters as we had numerous parties of split up characters all acting independently and concurrently, the way the action kept jumping between perspectives was incredibly cinematic.

And the expanded lore was fantastic as well. I’ve never read or seen anything besides the base ATLA show and season 1 of Korra, but all of the rules about the spirits and spirit world just made sense. Water based spirit bending to forcibly adjust the balance of a spirit, earth based spirit bending to forcibly adjust the balance of people, air based spirit bending to forcibly adjust the balance of a location, and fire based spirit bending to forcibly adjust the balance of a mind. Beautiful.

Thank you, really, for the delicious meal this novel was.

10/10 scenario, Looking forward to reading more :D

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Hmmmm both sand benders are gay huh? “Something in the water is turning the bloody benders gay!”

Bruh water bending was already so op and now only water benders can spirit bend? They don’t need more advantages vro XD

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I'll trust you and wait till stuff changes I guess.

Complete copy of the show so far and I'm expecting this won't change. Hopefully I'm wrong.

Twinklefeet lmao. Aang and Toph as friends with benefits aye?

Twinklefeet lmao. Aang and Toph as friends with benefits aye?