Reviews for Distorted Reality |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You're not dead, again :D |
![]() ![]() Where is gonna be the next chapter? |
![]() ![]() This is so good |
![]() ![]() But want to know: is the other katara who tell the other herself do not take kuskon's life or what? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aang should ask for a history book |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this is great. please please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter once again, though I now understand why you felt the rewrites were necessary. There were a few run-on sentences in here, especially toward the beginning, and the bit with Sokka joining at the end seemed a bit...casual. sokka seems to not even think twice about joining the Avatar, which, while a smart move, seems a bit sudden to me. I suppose that's just a nitpick though. More importantly, the offering of the sword came with no explanation to Sokka whatsoever. He just...gives him the sword, and Sokka doesn't even think to ask why Aang would just randomly give him a sword for joining Team Avatar when he's already a capable fighter without it and with weapons of his own. I feel like that entire bit there, Sokka's joining of Team Avatar and accepting the sword, could use a little more drama and reconciliation. Aside from those few faults, as I said, great chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() This is it? It starst beeing intresting I dont lile found nice story and to be able to saw it all I think it was older and 58 was the end I rely like start of whole serius At the end i rely like Aula fire lord Azula interaction and katara story part. That is i think best part from that story (whole Azula dynamick was intrestin from start and that idea of oposide character.) I rely not that intrest in other story And i rely didnt like idea of bringling wathu and rava mention. I realy dilike this from lok I hope i will see end of the story. Keep a good work Also is funny how i fid it from meme to comic to orginal fan project. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm starting this story, it's calling me a lot of attention, and even if it never happens, dammit, it would make me laugh so much that Aang at one point says: "Shit... I fell in love with Azula!" It would be so surreal lol |
![]() ![]() Wow, I really love this story. Please, I need an update! (Sorry for my bad english xD) |
![]() ![]() I liked this chapter, but I feel like they caught on a bit too quick. Aang's first mention of Zao clued Azula in on his hatred for Zao even before he admitted this "imagined" world was the one he came from. I feel as though instead of saying "imagine a world where this is what happened" and then "revealing" it to be real later, he should have stated from the beginning that he was not from this world and then explained himself in more detail after that so the emotional connection was clear. In your version, until he claims that he is from that other world, it kinda sounds like he made the whole thing up one night and then spent too long pondering it as a possibility. Other than that, I really liked this chapter, so good job! |
![]() ![]() Please continue this amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can not wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing. And the part about the spirit of the comet. Nice touch. I’m thinking that it was the cold spirit that allowed the emperor to encase her in the blue ice. |
![]() ![]() make more chapters pls |