I saw your AN asking for a review and realized i haven't yet, so here i am! this is SO FUN! i found this series because i had a craving for fancomics, and found the posts from that one artist who was illustrating some of this story. I read their portrayal of chapter 1 and knew i haaaad to read the OG before seeing the rest. absolutely hooked. I like how its so familiar, yet so different at the same time... i'm trying to guess who will be in what roles before we get to them, like i'm so nervous to find out who might be the yue in this situation. Another thing i am curious about is zuko's hairstyle during all of this, since its so tied to his character development in the og LOL. I am currently guessing it's high ponytail (BC he still rocked that in S1, just minus the shave bc he doesnt have the burn) or high bun. And might have grown out during the 3 years post-comet and aang got used to seeing it longer/bunned and thus didn't have a particular comment on seeing it put up that way. Watch my luck though, that in the next chapter or something the detail will come out and ill be looking very foolish rn XD

I think Aang would never bloodbend as it is entirely against his personality. He's not fierce as Katara can be.
Also There is no arc to Toph learning metal bending. She can just do it now I guess?

The fanfic is getting more and more convoluted as we go on. Try to keep things tidy. Too many characters might need too many arcs and everything will feel bloated and rushed, and other times it will feel slow and dragging.

Wouldn't Kanna be offering to teach Aang Waterbending too?

Really interesting. You addressed Aangs hypocrisy for loving Katara one-sidedly.

Yo why did you have to specifically go out of your way to keep zuko and katara away from eachother? Seems a little petty.

Wouldn't it make sense for one spirit to be the spirit for firebending? The sun spirit?

It's very weird for the dragon of destruction to give life to ty lee. shouldnt it be the dragon of life? Maybe sometimes a plot cannot always be mirrored...

Also stealing the sword is a huge no. What would that even accomplish? If its a present for Sokka it wouldnt make any sense as the og Sokka made his own blade from the rock that crushed his self esteem when his friends saved the day. It was part of his arc.
Not to mention betraying trust like that. I feel like Aang wouldn't do this.

I feel like Aang in a sparring outfit could've been made into a funny moment with Aang realising this is not for him anyway. Maybe moral support by sparring him as a sort of reverse air ball callback with sokka during the southern airtemple episode.
I also think there is nothing wrong with the bo Aang uses. He is already incorporating his bending with his staff. This should've been a learning experience for Zuko. Something for his arc.

Reading through multiple chapters I'm starting to find Azula too much like her og evil self. Is she from a humble village or a royal one? The tone is off. She's too cold here, even with her, 'fire is life' wisdom. She should be a tad bit sweeter sometimes. Or in any case a little bit less snide.

I found Aang making the same mistake with Azula and waterbending a little too copy pasted from the og timeline. Aang already respects every element. So making an immature mistake like that would be out of character for this more mature Aang.

The combustion man is fine and all but how did sokka find them without the shirshu?

This is so good i wish it was a book irl!

Thank you, it is a great story.

Thank you for writing this (and returning to finish it). I started reading this about six months ago and it has been an epic journey. I love your writing style and I hope to read more in the future.