Reviews for Enough
Neshomeh chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
Since you asked for reviews, this is mine:

What I see in your story is, first and foremost, not enough punctuation. You may not like it, but if you want people to take your writing at all seriously, you will have to learn to use it. The same goes for the rules of capitalization and spelling.

Also, I recommend re-reading the Redwall books, or whatever you're into at the moment, and take the time to notice how the author develops the characters and builds up the story. I think you'll find that it takes more than just a few paragraphs per chapter, even in a short work.

Good luck with your future projects. { )
creed9294 chapter 3 . 12/19/2007
wow how sad for him
pippermint chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
i see one period in your entire paragraph. and that scares me. along with the fact that your prologue is ONE PARAGRAPH.

viscously viciously

light hearted lighthearted

the best method for learning good grammar/spelling is reading.

i guess i don't have anything good to say, so bye-bye.