|Reviews for Torture|
| machievelli chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Posted 6 April 2013, at the Starwarsknights web site and the Lucasforums Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. I was posting directly to the actual story threads, but my computer went down for the second time in six months with a virus in June of 2012. Then in November kotorfanmedia went down for reasons unknown, so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. I had waited for it to revive, but you on fanfiction deserve your reviews.
Post KOTOR: Revan goes through the motions, and Carth suffers
While technically excellent, I felt a little down by the end of it. Neither one is really expecting to win, though all Carth has to do is endure. Both the victim and tormentor are going through the motions. The best part is the internal monologues. Both in their own way hope for another ending.
| FeeldaForce chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
intense. but i loved it! great job! i love the emotions portrayed in this!
| Em chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Wow, good on you Ducky, this is amazing. A beautiful, dark story, with a clever yet realistic twist on love.
Given any thought to writing Mass Effect fanfiction yet?