Reviews for Snow Dawn
mydirt09 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I like it and yea his is a touchy subject. Good job writting it.
Qwertymann chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
This story was very weird. I dunno if I like it or not, but it was very weird.

The conversation didn't seem much natural. It seemed forced. Mainly because they talked about nothing except religion and philosophy. Often in conversation, you stray from the main topic a lot (but eventually, it does come back to it), so this could've been a lot better to make conversation natural. Raven was very well in character (except for the "Nn" part at the end... she wouldn't be so simple-minded.)

Beast Boy seemed rather intelligent for his character, just a little too intelligent. You have quite a few typos in this story as well. A bit of proof reading goes a long way. That's all I have to say.