I know it's been years since you've updated this story, and chances are you won't see this, but I'd just like to say that I genuinely enjoyed reading this story. It was well written, and the plot was very interesting.

aawwwww ssoooo sad pouts...he needs love too dang it...sadness it was getting good!

Was another really good chapter, Sapphire explaining what Bulma is to Vegeta was great.

Enjoyed seeing Goku around in this chapter, you write him quite well.

Like the action start to this one, was well done and again the back and forth of Brolly and Sapphire is really good.

Really liked the beginning of this one, the little bit between Vegeta and Bulma was great

Like the reveal of her name to him at the end of the chapter a great way to wrap it up. Their back and forth is written well to.

The meeting of the two was really well done, enjoyed it very much.

Bulma and Vegita are written quite well, glad to see them in the storyline.

A good start to the story, sends the hooks out well, makes you want to keep reading to find out what will happen next.

The ending in this chapter was really good. And I liked the caged beast writing you did for Brolly!

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I really enjoyed this story and I thank you fro writing it! It was quite enjoyable to read. You're definitely one a talented writer! :)

nicely written and great song selection :)

"It's just food for thought. Chew on it." haha I like how Goku is with food XD