Reviews for The Contentious Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow. One of the best fanfiction pieces I've ever read. The plot twist, the way of describing things even details it's simply amazing. And the way that you put yourself in the character's shoes like Sakura or Itachi, to show how confused they were at each other. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't imagine Deidara doing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I'm literally hooked on this story! Sakura being a spy within the organization is the perfect fit for how I imagine she would look and act on Konoha's behalf! Was this your first fic? My congratulations for the dedication to writing and the precision in strolling through different points of view of the characters. And each character is for me according to their persona. The part that touched me the most was Tsunade feeling embraced through Sakura's communication through the wind. Very handsome! Tsunade always considered Sakura as her daughter. Hugs to the author! |
![]() ![]() Kisame and Deidara as wingmans for the win! Seriously love how they talked Itachi and Sakura into seeing sense. Beautifully written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story thank you for sharing your gift with others loved reading every word |
![]() ![]() Seriously, so good. And Itachi blushing was hilarious! |
![]() ![]() Oh my, yep, he got what he deserved. |
![]() ![]() How can this story be this good? Like seriously! Should have gone to bed hours ago haha |
![]() ![]() Man, this story is golden. Character development, pacing, the dialogue, brilliant! |
![]() ![]() I love how Sakura embraces her emotions. |
![]() ![]() Masterfully written, truly. |
![]() ![]() AHhh, so good! Really enjoy your writing style! |
![]() ![]() I like how you showcase Sakura's personality - of course she would heal Deidara. |
![]() ![]() Oh man, it's getting good! Very much enjoy your writing style. |
![]() ![]() Incredible writing! Very impressed with the way you set up the story so neatly without any dragging sections. Nice! |