|Reviews for Faction Eliminated|
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
I know this story is pretty old, but this is a very interesting and atmospheric beginning. The description of Yang's needlejet approaching the University was particularly good.
That neither Zakharov nor Yang quite trust each other made their discussion really interesting to read.
One typo: (Morgan Industries and it's ally the Peacekeepers) (its ally)
Zakharov is misspelled twice. ("As much as I'd like to help you, old friend," Zharkov continued,) (Zhakarov glanced at Dr. Filoh)
I really liked Yang's reaction to Filoh correcting his estimate of when New Liberty would fall.
| B chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
please please please continue this, it's really good!
| Xaoc chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Great job. I love the in-depth look you give us to the characters. Any chance of a second chapter? Pretty please?
| Dave chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
A nice bit of military sci-fi. It really fleshes out the characters.
| Robespeire chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Your depiction of the character is exactly as I imagined them, well done.