|Reviews for High School Armageddon|
| Desertfyre chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Wa, that was so sad. A teenager that lost it and went randomly shooting. I'm glad that Sam was okay in the end.
I haven't fully looked at your other stories yet, but I'd love a sequel to this to see how Sam is faring. :)
| friendly chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
just found you. great stories.. I really liked this one..
| gidgetgal9 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Wow, that was intense. Poor Sammy, and his family. That sort of situation happens far to much- and more scary than any of the monsters they face. You captured that fear so well here. :0)
| spnMom chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Woah! This was intense! With all the school shootings in recent years, this is especially relevant. I think you covered the mind numbing fear that can over take a person, even a trained person, in times of stress like that. Good Job!
| imissmymind chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Alright, take two.
First off, I really like your patience with the progression of this. I don't know if other people really notice when someone is patient, but I definitely do because that's something I struggle with- I always want to get to the substance and sometimes struggle in taking the time on the build-up. I liked your pacing on this, though. It was slow enough to paint a good story, but fast enough to pack like a punch, like I think this should be- choppy, fast and to the point. Your style on this, I would say, is a big underlying factor of why this turned out so well.
Also, I think you did a really good job with the dialogue. You really used it as a basis for your story, which I think is good because this was panic mode, focused in, so the details aren't as important.
Anyway, I already gave you some feedback on this, so I won't ramble on as much as I did in the other one. But I really liked both of these and I hope you will continue to finish pieces and don't hesitate to send them my way for a quick beta, either.
Sidenote: I wrote something! Six months later, I finally got that tag to Playthings written and I really liked the way it turned out. It's one of the rare things I've written lately that actually feels like my writing, if that makes sense. Anyway, I'm hoping that kind of paves the way for some more writing, because I'm really wanting to get back into it.
Have a good New Years. :)
| Adara-chan67 chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Hmm...ya know, I was gonna do something like this after reading the book "19 Minutes" by Jodi Picoult. I was a little sad when I saw that someone had beaten me to it.
But then I actually read the story, and I thought, "Okay, wow. This is so much better than I could have done." And it's true-you did so much better than I could have, and that's all there is to it.
So, in short, I LOVE this and am no longer sad. Sammy is so adorable-and also cool-and Dean is so...well, Dean. *claps hands*
And hey, maybe I'll see if I can dig up a different spin...worth the thought, anyway...*ponders*
Great job! Hope to see more from you!
| sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Oh wow, you so had me on the edge of my seat with this one! My heart was in my throat once I found out that the shooter was headed Sammy's way, and I got goosebump when I read that he was in the same room as Sammy!
I can only imagine the horror John and Deam must have felt when they saw the gunman leading Sammy outside with a gun to his head, and poor Sammy, thinking that he was the reason two of the kids had gotten killed!
I'm still chilled just thinking about what could have happened to Sammy!
| RhianaStar chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Wow! What a story? You were able to combine what was going outside with what was going inside so well. Story was easy to follow and talk about "edge of seat" suspense... look forward to reading more of your stories...
| pageavenue57 chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
I know you heard it before but dude this is one of my favorites from you and weechester yea your awesome for writing it and making me wait for it haha i was so happy last night when i read the whole thing again awesome job love it