|Reviews for The Rise Of The Raven 1 The Philosophers Stone|
| Fast Frank chapter 9 . 6/25/2013
Wow! That's the darkest Dumbledore I've ever seen.
| edboy4926 chapter 9 . 6/15/2013
| mysticmoon1331 chapter 9 . 3/6/2013
i would really like to read more! :)
| Zak saturday 1 chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
Update soon please
| Slytherin Studios chapter 9 . 8/21/2012
I like your story, please update soon.
| My Solitude chapter 9 . 5/26/2012
Interesting chapter. XD
| Sean Malloy-1 chapter 9 . 5/9/2012
Very interesting job, though your grammar needs a bit of work. I hope this story will be updated.
| Ezkutu chapter 9 . 1/25/2012
A pity you haven't updated this fic in years or that somebody didn't adopt it. Otherwise, I've really liked it since I admit I would neer have thought about crossing Mission Impossible and Harry Potter. Besides the idea of Hogwarts being "infested" by spies is fun. Good work nonetheless.
| Wolf Dragon Demon chapter 9 . 12/30/2011
Really good fic and hope that you continue when you have the time.
| poolynn chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Loved the story Please update
| poolynn chapter 9 . 9/23/2011
I know it has been a few years since you hjave updated but this is a great story worth continuing so please update!
| grimmich chapter 9 . 9/10/2011
This is very interesting! I can't wait to see what happens! I hope you don't make Harry a shorty (I hate it when people put in the abuse and then make him shorter then most of the girls... if they could wrap their little minds around it they would realize that there could be a potion to reverse the affects of malnutrition and being in a confined space all of his life, in order to make it more believable they could have it to where he is in a coma like sleep until his body fills out completely and then give him a little while to get used to the extra height and weight... [I have only ever read one fic where someone else thought of this, and they had the procedure done when he went to the bank the first time and the goblins found out what happened to him and the fact that Dumbles was stealing from them... I should find out what the name of it was...] This would give you the angst of the abuse (as long as he is not a scardy cat it makes the story better, but when you make him submissive and powerless even when he is magically powerful, that just crosses the line...) but he still gets to be tall, well muscled, and hot when he is older... as far as this goes, you might want to get rid of his glasses (potion or spell is possible, hell even contacts!) as they would probably be a hindrance unless they were for show (his glasses get knocked off and he can't do anything because he can't aim a spell! or see where he is running). Over all I like where this is going so far and I can't wait to see if there is any bashing (I really hate Ginny, Molly, Percy, Dumbledore, and Hermione [I really like that whole male trio thing whether they be Harry is in Slytherin or Harry is Gryffindor I just don't like Hermione! Ron is an on/off thing for me it depends on how the characters are written...) and I can't wait to see what you have done to make your story line come to life! This is bound to be interesting and I appreciate what you did to the Dursley (sp?) family, I just wish Harry could get some revenge before they went, though I guess you could count the statement... anyways, I am rambling I just wanted to tell you that it is good so far and to PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
| reader1writer1 chapter 9 . 3/9/2011
I really liked this. i'd love it if you picked it up again :)
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 9 . 1/11/2011
i loved i9t.i can't wait for more.i can't wait to see Dumbles get what he deserves.
| Birdy chapter 9 . 9/21/2010
This is awesome! XD I love it, I wasn't sure how the two would combine together, but you did excellent!