Reviews for Hermione's Headache
Eldritch.screech chapter 1 . 9/26/2019
This is pure loveliness, warm and HOT at the same time!
quantumtoast chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
So, while I really do like your writing I just wanted to point something out that is worryingly prominent in smut fics. There is no such thing as a barrier in a virgin's vagina. The hymen is the circle of elastic muscle at the entrance of the vagina. Some women, particularly petite women or those who are very nervous during their first time may experience pain the first time they are having sex because of this muscle being stretched. Unless something goes horribly wrong, nothing will tear or break down there. If the girl is properly prepared and the guy has done his best to help prepare her like by giving head or fingering, there would be enough blood flow down there to help loosen and flex the hymen. The reason people may experience a feeling like tearing is because the hymen when too tense pulls on the internal vaginal walls. In cultures both past and present where wedding night are observed and sheets are searched for blood it is often because the girl is very young, completely unaware of what is going to happen to her and has just been married to a man she may barely even know. Her hymen is therefore so tight that when the guy forces his way in, micro-tears in the hymen appear. This is actually very dangerous as in countries with poorer healthcare and hygiene standards, these micro-tears are open to getting infected. Basically the only barrier in the vagina is the cervix which has a tiny hole through which period blood is removed from the womb. Again, in olden times people would check to see if the hymen had shifted to determine rape cases or if a girl was a virgin, however, as this is a muscle, it can be shifted from horse riding or running around, it's the reason the whole side saddle method of riding a horse came into being and why women were dissuaded from running or exerting themselves because if something happened where her virginity was called into doubt, a small shift could have ruined their lives. I don't mean this to be a big rant or anything, it's just if girls read this, they go into their first time expecting it to hurt and that's not good for anyone involved. First times are always a bit awkward and embarrassing which is why I loved how you got Charlie to actually be very conscious of relaxing her and setting her at ease, however, maybe in future fan fics talk about how he can feel her clenching when he tries with a finger and he gently massages and talks to her telling her to relax, a guy using a second finger should mean she has enough blood flow down there that the area stretches fairly well now, if not it would have been a struggle to get the finger in there in the first place without it hurting. using a slight scissoring motion with the two fingers should ensure it stretches comfortably wide enough for all but the biggest of men, so in fics if you want to indicate that a guy knows he is big have him add a third finger and rotate the hand, that would ensure readiness for basically any realistic size of guy ever. Most women have what is know as the G spot and the C spot. G spot is only really accessed through fingering with one or two fingers unless some weird positions are used, what women more commonly feel with full penetration is hitting of the C spot near the cervix. I hope this helps and wasn't too graphic :P
Haylee Dreyer-Justin chapter 1 . 8/5/2017
amazing loved it
FlowerChild23 chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
Wow!
misscosette08 chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
Your writing is still amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
I really wasn't into him having her keep tasting her own body fluids (ew), but the rest of it? Awesome job!
killer4853 chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
like
Brittney chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Now THAT is how you write a story. Everything about this is perfect. I'm just upset Charlie isn't real!
Tintaglia'sPride chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Cute story! I really like Hermione and Charlie as a pair. Someone just a bit wild for her.
Ms. Sorostitute chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Loved it! You're a great writer!
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
At least she got her headache relief even though I think the vial of headache potion must have been a lust potion instead.
MischiefHasBeenManaged chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I liked it very, very much, especially the last line about Molly and her headache potion :]
KatsOnTheAirplane chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Love it
einnidmalfoy chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
This is so sweet! (:
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
loved the oneshot more of them please thank you keep them coming
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