You were their dialogue perfectly.

this is amazing I love itt!

The twist is freaking awesome! You got the humour down pegged indeed XD

LMFAOROTFF DUDE

I'm giggling over Zuko's sewing. I LOVE your writing!

Okay, I know it's been ELEVEN FRICKIN YEARS but I can't keep quiet. I actually snorted aloud at Sokka's cheesy ninja line. Zuko with his impressions made me smile (though the Ozai thing was appropriately somber), and was that a Star Wars reference I detected? "It runs in my family; my father has it, my sister has it, I have it …"

This is a freakin' GEM. Seriously, I died. The whole damn thing made me smile like a loon. This is fabulous

Ha ha ha.

This was awesome! The interactions between the members of the Gaang were spot on, and I love how you aren't painting Katara as a Mary-Sue who does everything right. She's young and quick to judge, so it's great that you had the other characters put her in her place. I loved the reactions between Aang and Zuko, as well. You did a great job showing Zuko's remorse, and how he really did mean well. Especially loved how protective he is of Katara, and how his concern slips out. Fantastic work.

I have a feeling Sokka gave him cactus juice

OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING I TOTALLY CRACKED UP SO MANY TIMES!

Poor Sokka

*howls with laughter*

This is so lovely. Your writing and your characterization of them are so, so, so lovely. This is actually the second time I'm reading it; I'm trying to get your atmosphere and love and complete awesomeness memorized in my bones, because you have definitely inspired me to try and attempt an ATLA story, but I really don't think I can do what you can.

I think my favorite thing is how you weave in the culture of the nations, like the fire nation dress, and I adore Zuko and Toph's relationship so much!

Haha! That was great! The ending ,especially!