Reviews for Once Upon a Time
LucidKren chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
:( This was super depressing. Good job. ('Cause that was what you were going for.) Nicely written, and the formatting was different and definitely worked well here.
lottersbee chapter 1 . 2/15/2009

that was... different.


interesting, too.

and abrupt.

"and once upon a time - they died."


and like the other three have already made a point of mentioning, i like the way that no names were said.

if you didn't know the story of kh, you'd be pretty lost.


and it IS good.

makes you wonder.

well, it makes ME wonder, anywho.

Staple Queen chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Rather depressing, but very good, very good indeed. ._.

Short and sweet. Also liked that you didn't mention their names...

...And the different text effects make it very appealing as well. xD
azucrim chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Wow. I think this is really good. :)

I like how you described them without using names, especially the 'fighting his best friend' paragraph. The ending was my favorite, though (the ending being from where they lost their minds to when they died). It's

Great job, I can't wait to see more from you~!

-crimson horizons
Shattered Mirror01 chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Aww... I liked it!