|Reviews for Dear little Avenger|
| Repeating Death chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
There is a reason my name is Repeating Death...
My pain repeats everyday..
My life seems pointless..
Sitting in the shadows..
Seeing all those sickly smiles..
Everyone else having fun..
My pain repeats..
| Alaenor JS-XIII chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Short, sad, and depressing, but rather sweet. Good overall, but could take a little more detail. It's vague, and kind of generic.
'Tittle' is spelled incorrectly. It's supposed to be 'title'. You've done that more than once.
| cast14 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
great little poem i liked it i hope you will write others
| narutoking101 chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
heh. nice poem very emo. but i think the last line:"to black" was a little cliche (spelling?) nice work though
| Weirdo-Lover chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Thats nice, we're talking bout Sasuke here right? XD! J/K...but really, it fitted him...