Uh...wow... O.O.. you certainly scare the crap outta me!

It's hard to comment because all the apostrophes were showing up as black boxes to me, which made the whole poem rather difficult to read.

Nevertheless, I copy-and-pasted it into word and fixed that, and when I read it through, I quite enjoyed it. It has a very constant feeling, and flows surprisingly well. I can very easily see why your english teacher was scared. Not the brightest of poems, hmm?