Reviews for When I was young
Rara-Binks chapter 16 . 9/3/2012
Love it! please continue!
EdwardzChick chapter 14 . 8/31/2010
when arre they gonna b togethorr?

and whats happeningg? im so confusedd
BreGyrl23 chapter 14 . 2/21/2010
hurry up with chapter 15 please
nyadhuor khol chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
EdwardCullenMasenforever chapter 14 . 10/11/2009
haha you should continue ] its very good
IroleWiththeVampires2 chapter 14 . 8/10/2009
Great chapter! I love the ending 'cause I love Emmett :D.

Update soon!
BewareTheBandersnatch chapter 13 . 4/13/2009
this is really really good please update soon!
magicaltears chapter 13 . 3/27/2009
I'd definitely like to know what your talking about in your author's note. *Grins* Hopefully you update soon!

mello-ello chapter 13 . 3/15/2009
hope you update soon
Lolly chapter 13 . 12/19/2008
Bella to tell Carlisle

starts to date jacob and Edward gets jelous and Bella gets cought in the cross fire kinda like the book but she also gets the vamps attacking after a fight with edward

what do ya think?
TwyliteLuvr chapter 13 . 9/24/2008
Hi! I like this story a lot! I really like the idea on this story. It's very creative. The only thing bad I can say about this story is that it has multiple grammatical errors and words that are used in the wrong tense or form. I'd be happy to beta this story so we could work together to clean up and develop future chapters. Reply to this comment or send me a PM if you're interested.

hpgrl95 chapter 13 . 9/6/2008
awesome! hey do u have an idea of when edward and bella will get together? just wonderin! loved the party idea!

NoLongerAFanfictionReader chapter 13 . 8/8/2008
great ch! what do you need help with?
fireflii chapter 13 . 8/8/2008
That was pretty good. It's suspencful too. :) Ugh Serene(?) and her gang really annoy me, but it's coming along nicely. It would've been so funny if Jessica started complaining, and Bella just snapped.

~Skylaar Wolf
Maren Mitchell chapter 13 . 8/4/2008
That was some good writing, update soon :)
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