|Reviews for Moments|
| overninethousand chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
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| rene10 chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Great, I'm gonna go cry now. This was amazing.
| NeverWillBe chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
| masruiiiik chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
This was actually pretty sad. I don't understand how this goes underneath the 'humor' column though. I feel like there's an unidentified and undeniable romance there that they didn't persue which was heartbreaking.
I also can't help but wonder if Rin ever truly loved her husband, did she?
And Kagome died? Well, I guess not everyone can live forever.
And why did Rin say she'll stay with him forever when that was apparently not the case? Either way, loved this.
| Zinala chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Awe. The last line caused a flutter in my heart.
This was a truly lovely story :D
| Maiden of the Internet chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I hate JURO! He must DIE! SESSHY and RIN! No other! And why did she say she would stay forever, if she wasn't going to?
*Continues ranting for a few hours, then sighs and stops*
Sorry, it was cute, but~ I LOVE MY FLUFFY RIN X SESSHY!
Rin: Yaya! I do too~!
Of course you would, you get fluffy!
Sesshomaru: Why do you pathectic mortals insist on calling me that?
Rin: Because you're cute like that.
Sesshy: *(Pauses for a moment)* I like the name fluffy.
Of course, Rin thinks it's cute, and you love it. You people drive me nuts. I'm out, peace!
| lychee loving chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Reverse story telling is indeed lots of fun, but only if done right! And you got it so, so, so right.
I read this backwards (reverse-reverse story telling?), too. It was just as good, that way, too. Awesome work! :)
| amukay chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I love this. I like to feel there is some kind of romantic feelings between them both in this - perhaps an eternity of love is much better, after all?
It's clever; reminds me slightly of The Handmaids Tale with the layout. I had lots of fun reading.
| Taraah36 chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
you know i've read this before have you entered this on mf sanctuary?..
| Onba chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
It's sweet! And sad too, but mostly sweet! It's very good story!
| k chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
you made me cry
| bloomsburry chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
this oneshot was so sad. it nearly made me cry.
| ancient-relic chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Aw, that was so beautiful, it made me tear up. I also had to read it through more than once; the first time, I understood half of it... and then I re read it from 1 to 10, and it was perfect. XD The way you wrote about Sesshomaru's and Rin's relationship was beautifully simple... and I think a perfect representation of how things actually are with them. There is absolutely NOTHING I would change with this at all. Well done! :D
| queenruby987 chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
good story I like the ending. It's cute
| YenGirl chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Oh, this was sad... even though I knew he was dying but reading through the whole thing... it was sad. Well, that actually means it was good... that she waited for him. But now, I want something hilarious to chase away the cloud that's taken up residence over my head *tries to shoo away stubborn cloud*