Reviews for Vitriol
SilverKyo chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
pretty good story, interesting title, really got my attention, nice version of the ending. did you happen to get the Hey, hey, hey thing from christopher titus, because he says that exact thing almost in a comedy, and it's really funny. besides the fact that it seemed like a little random of a way to win a fight, not bad.
LoveTheKenyans chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
i liked this one. i think in the story description you should havadded 'Humor' along with 'General'
Airwalker88 chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
And if u can't shape up, nobody wants u f**k the whole world i want everybody saying HEY! MITCHEY! Give it a bit of vitriol indeedio. Dude! Awesome one-shot.
Zutara-is-evil-Kataang-rules chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
-can't be botherd to sign in- Awesome story! Very funny, I totally loved it. I'm typing fast coz I have to get off the computer or else I'd write more. :P

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