Reviews for Grandeur
FloatingPanda chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Hey!:) just finished reading your story, 'Grandeur.' It's such a great story.:) Deidara's the sweetest. But that was kind of harsh on Sakura that she seemed pushed away and Sasuke didn't even bother fixing things. But either way, this was great.:) I hope you make more of this with more lemons. Because honestly, you're lemons are great. Great turn on.:)) LOL. Love your work! Lease keep it up!:D xoxo
SableSpace chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Loved it:) Very well written, and completely in character.
Chloeee-Avs chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
This was... AWESOME! Omg I really loved it :D
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
This is beautiful, I really don't have a different word to describe your story. The way it evolves is perfect and some parts left me giggling while others made me upset. This is beautiful.
MidnightWhisper15 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
wow! that's all I can say and BANG! yeah!
YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
OH MY GOD, Kakashi calling Sakura on being late just about killed me. That was awesome! And the thing about her shouting out her window, and those poor men on the street below her... Ah, bliss. XD And Sakura's thoughts on the crime lord's henchmen are fantastically amusing.

So, yeah, clearly I adore all the comedic bits here and there. They're very well done. As is the actual plot itself. It's great that you have them meet over and over again through a long period of time in a variety of places, because usually it seems that the two of them are stuck with each other somehow, or he sneaks into Konoha (ir)regularly to, ah, visit her, ahem. XD So this was a nice change! I think this story is super well put-together. And there really aren't as many typos as it sounded like you expected there to be. :)
devahoshikage chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Serendipithy chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I loved how you took the Deidara's trademark concept/idea that "art is fleeting" and elaborated it into an extended metaphor in their relationship. It's deep. It's wonderful. For their relationship dynamics, it's perfect. :)

As just about everyone else said, this was "awesome."
Animegirl198 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Did sasori die first and deidara not know or did diedara die first I forget?
Kirsten1726 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Awww !

Best.. Oneshot... EVER! :O

I love you 3 xD

No honestly though this was exactly what i was lookíng for thank you for making my day :D

It was definitely worth those two day and 22 pages in word you spent on it, Thank you
TekJounin chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Loved it. Deidara was as in character as he might be, sans Akatsuki.
Anime Freak456 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
That was awesome! I love it! You did a fantastic job! I laughed in some parts and was sad in other parts. This was as close to perfect as something can get! I am amazed! You're awesome!
Annasvip chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Great one! I loved it. :)

I think Deidara was very on character, and the story was very exciting.

However, Sasuke wouldn't marry Ino, not in normal mental conditions.
erlebnisse chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
One of the best DeiSaku one shots that I've read so far.

Characterization was amazing- as was your writing style.

Iforgotmypassword chapter 1 . 8/29/2010


what a perfect story... you did it, you made me read this, you made me love this.

thank you so much.

and if i could, i would give you some flowers as a thank you.

you made me realise something very important. i feel alot like the sakura in your story. thanks to you i know what i have to do to finally becomd happy.

again, thank you.

i really would love to read more from you soon.

congeatulations on writing this beautyful story
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