Reviews for Just One Day
LolTyphlosion chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
This is what happens when u play pokémon too much...
taylor chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Loved but your a asshole for doing that ending it would have been better if he went to the Pokemon world
elete12 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
wow 250 years 1000 miles away... the English language is so different!

and was that an attempt at a southern American accent or is that how you guys really talk?
CanYouSpellPi chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Pokemon/human is just sick. Only mentally unwell people would find such things enjoyable.

Not only that, but your story is utter crap. Your grammar sucks and you don't seem to understand how to structure a story properly.

Derden95 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Wow, i never saw the ending commin... That just sucks, meet the love of your life [from another world] and suddenly when things couldent get better, shes gone.

One thing thats kind of funny is that I'm reading this from my DS.

Still I hated the ending :,(
SirLuciousWolf chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Hey nice story! very smoothness to it
The Lone Gamer151 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Bravo. Excellent all the way. Slightly depressing at the end.
SeanB1014 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
How very touching... Please write a sequel! It should be of Lucrio coming back and sending him to the Pokemon world with her! Please do that!
Teraunce chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Interesting story. 14/10. kinda can't wait for sequel. faved & alerted.
estelin chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
flamedramon6 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Wish you would continue this story, I really loved it!

And the rule? Oh dear, that's not really good...

jon91 chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
you rock dude write a sequel
Abbodon chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Great story, *Sniffle*, keep up these awsome sotries
Darkwingthedeep chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
You MUST write a sequel (menacing growling sounds)

aherm, also like the original idea, the pokemon coming from the game and lucario with someone, never see that nowadays
M0J0 MAN chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Please. I beg you to update again.
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