Reviews for Open Door
Thuggy chapter 1 . 7/20
First off: Phoenix's eyes are actually gray. Not brown. Just saying.


Now that I've gotten that out of the way... that was the best oneshot I've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. It went from funny to so touchingly HUMAN before reaching that sweet-and-warm-as-honey ending so fluidly. Thanks for this.
V340E419 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Fantastic story!
Can't believe I am finding this story just now, it flowed nicely.
Little Town chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
This is an amazing fic! I missed my daily dose of Phoenix x Maya this morning, and I got hungrier and hungrier for it this upcoming evening. This story completely satisfied my hunger, leaving me full and ready to go to sleep with my shipping feels. My inner editor says that this could have been proofread more, but other than that, everything is amazing!
JdF chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
I know this is a very late review. :)) But I really loved this PhoenixMaya story. Specifically hat you made them so in-character like without exaggerating and adding unneeded tension. You still had original plot stuff and all. :)

The end actually made me a bit teary-eyed.. Actually teary-eyed indeed. :)) It's just so sweet. :')

Oh and I'm curious about the picture. I can't see the picture, hope you could post a link somewhere. If your not that busy. :) Hope to read more stories from you. :D

Great Job. :)
gombo12345 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
AW... so romantic!
RenjiLuvah chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
EJHKJHAKJDGKGSDJHGS this melted all my insides to goo! I was literally clinging my blanket as I read on and all of a sudden Phoenix went "low husky gentle voice and finger on your chin" mode and Maya must have been SWEATING BULLETS! OMG Phoenix- when did YOU become such a suave ladies man? XD Awesome! I loved hidden attachment to movie night and the sweet way it ended. I can just imagine the whole scene- it's so cute! I think I have cavities.

I've only played the first game but I definitely sense some love between Nick and Maya. I wonder if I'll ship 'em more passionately when I play the other games? Hmm. Great read and I wantz more! This fic just made me want to hug Phoenix until he turned blue. :D
Nameless FLowr chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Wow! That was incredibly emotional and very touching. The end sentence really added to the story.
purplepjs chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Absolutely lovely. I love the subtlety of their affection for one another. Just beautiful.
Cynthia chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
This is so beautiful! I like it so so so so so much! You made my day, thank you!
iryna chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
D'aw...that was adorable!
Chocolatheque chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Wow, the way you write these characters is absolutely perfect! This whole piece just gave me warm fuzzies. :) Great job.
Concetta chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Aw! That was so fantastically well-written and believable that it is going under my favorites! Everyone was in-character, too! I want to make a fan comic out of this. With your permission, maybe I will.! :) Check out my stuff, if you like at ncetta20.

Touzen chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
platonic? blasphemy! this is a gem among maya/phoenix fics! that 'Friendship' in the genre thing could easily be turned into a 'Romance' and it would still fit! but, as a die hard M/P, that's just how I roll. anyways, loved it, nice and long too.
The blackdash chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Uwa~ Kinda fluffy! Pwe~ The fangirl in me is singing lame love songs and dancing slowly to an invisible man -coughPhoenixcough-. lol at that. Pwee~
Jean V chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Ah! That was simply cute ) I love the way you portray Phoenix and Maya. Phoenix was so in-character that I nearly cried. These days it's hard to find some good Phoenixes...

And of course, Maya was excellent as well. It's entirely believable that she would do that, even in a storm.

Though the first thing that struck me while I was reading was, Poor Pearly. hehe )

I look forward to more fics of this shipping )
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