Reviews for Blood Drive
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
That was well done. Especially liked the Tee slogan...I laughed, a lot!
Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 8/13/2017
Chapter Ow!BLACKING OUT Then sudden ly with bitten b est frien ds sudden ly Killed Vulcans as all of them with m ore ass v ery exttremely thisty hungriest wild to goodn es n ewb orn from asa all oh m y God then Killed more V ulcan s don ating blood the guard fou accusede of treason an d m urdering the Vulcan sd Was sCREAM ING Then Kidnapped with them b ut the chan ge of sort with both b ites with three kidn apped then Drained torn from her were then Flam es was into then ven om was from as all of snakes Shaved heads then suddenly too late Brainwashed was Anmesiac offically then sudden ly was b oun d into their brain s exploding gifts too late suffered then a strangest fiery transformation exploding then enhan c ded as all of it ev erything wass b lack n o mem ories then gone with looks of a Vampire slaying sailor guardian it's begun Died here then lost m emories began m y change then became Fiercer Strong fast powerful but was v ery lethal b ut m ore dan gerous en ded up with a strain it is chan ging her then it happened open ed my newest eyes then it was too late glowing more advan ced then Blacking out without mem ories tell them she's their Asasin have her train ed reedacuated Too late scream imgh was a killer b ut murder was b oun d to them trained b ut jopin ed ther Phoen ix coven had a n ew life a family was a lethal Aassin b ut sudden ly too late as all of Vulcans drained killed Joham Maria an d Huilen took the four un der my own wing then suddenly too late Alice had a vision blocking from her m in df was a lethal sailor soldier train ed m ore then recruiting m ore in my cause then was no lon ger human was in fact a V am pire Slaying Sailor Guardian wearing un dercover clothes acted human oh my god who took her them recuited her ten too late Found me with them Nulled from my powers advan ced then B lacking them out Bella oh my god It's Bellona Goddes of fire an d Soul! Crashing freely the bodies then sudden ly these were the carnivorous selves then he tested me of my health oh my god she b een bitten that they reported they took her from us then foun d you are guilty fot turning Imm ortal children Felix rid of them With her with her arm y then screamimg EXECUTED US/THEM With witnesses she was bitten byu sn akes you lite Bella you die with C laire Young bitten I DID IT DON'T then More bones with therm torn from here then suddenly lost from here the very as all of the tortures onto myself Alice do som ething she/they is dying ogf a disease then then Lost from here blown freely with them bring therm who are guilty then Snapped then it was too late never return ed with the bodies weere with blood then too late killed that my Change was sucessful b ut left me without b lood for a week b ut suddenly made me fertile but it was too late survived it was n ow cold as ice made me v ery scorn ful bitter was wrathful and Hated what I Become a creature then suddenly my nwest looks just shattering four were one harden Granite skin woke with Anmesia with grown hair with ban gs Alice what they diid infected her with b oth she's dead with them Bella um news flash your senses are way over the starbase you are a Vampire with enhanced senses he placed his mother's ring You are no longer humans that was it saved your seedds then myself was More striking but Drop dead Had Bright Strawb erry eyes of Crimson then Blacking out then b rought here they harb ored newborn s are deceased poisoned them with their kids dead good they c annot m ate at all b ut herself into sorrow we curseed her with them with truest bitter immortality had hunted an im als as all of more mon strous is departed but b ring them they are sentenced to die here b ut rid of Irina Garrett trained her to slay is her watc er what replaced her they are here with news they are no longer there b lown from here good that
a burial serivce for us Alice her eyes turned golden /b lack who done to you Felix oh m y god ripped apart can you rec all u ev er had a fam ily where are we South Carolina that was it myself griev ed in the Vulcan fashion un able to bear you signed a lease yes now at a newest high school did like them they were seeing m y god eyes sallow-looking skin did homework in stead of eating was so pale frozen at teenagehood was real but too late the bodies aged far too much the Earth suffered weeping with tears of grief plopped us then myself felt a light blaring m y forehead Crap man yuour station s Bella down here a cat say Betazed Crystal power m akeup! THAT'S IT HENSHIN YO BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! M y nwest v oice echoed highest then suddenly nails b lin king then suddenly a golden alien radiance with the Beyon d my sailor team yeelling then suddenly letting loose a Trilling Xena warrior princ ess's war c ry exploding to war and battle Guided by Betazed the planet of Telepathy and Fire Guardian senshi of the Soul the pretty suited soldier the n am e is SUPER SAILOR BETAZERD On the behalf of Betazed I WILL PUNISH YOU! IS HERE! BLINK! That was it a warrior was born so theyblown with as all of them nulled b lackin g out then with as all shattering b rought here then reported as all of them foun d guilty are dead of blood loss use themn uke them but first she is not alive an ymore but destroy them as all then ashes phaser blasted but blown guards then no more as all with them nulled from here but it was as all last blood exploding with their turn ed b oth shatterring reborn Destroying that was it the seer had a problem her visionS Advanced matured grew up was having a Vision burst Alice they did it Bella keep your shields activated then Popped freely with more remains then b rought here now newest guards overcrowding then n uking with them a very loudest n oise they reported via turns they are with powers but they c annot die from the drugged state blown with as all with supernatural forced V am pires to try Tru-Blood from the drugged way b lew up b ring the convicts here then too late all were few last lot more destroyed then as newest kills destroyed but more guards will take over Earth we conqeusted Earth all of hum an ity are slaves good do it that they did took over then it was too late ruled ov er us/them aboard brought as all of human ity with b oth warped with as all things from here then Exploding with a fleet merged with both shattering Created a starc ruiser weere morer then Exploded with one largest thing nulled everrything with more than as all of them suddenlly bodies of as all from around the world sudden ly with more then b rought here b ut m ore than as all but it left from here sudden l ore as all of them crashed onto Vulcan was a desert world was trapped into here sealed now too late they used the bodies then too late that was exploding from here it caused as all of them now 2017-2381 came unable to return to Earth.
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Hm...this is first hand experience? The freaking out nurse had the foresight to give you a cold compress? Really? Quick thinking on her part then...

Anyway, Bella managed way better than expected :)
Shadowhunterlover 00 chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
Awwwwwwwwwwww! Such a sweet shirt. And such a nice thing for Bella to do
LucasBieneke chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
I love your writing style- great work!
Twilightfanatic85 chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
I loved
meelee72 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Aww, so cute. - Been a while since I read a nice lil canon.
Enjoyed it. :))
The shirt was perfect.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
That sounds like a cute tee-shirt! Thanks for writing this story.
blank chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
aww, luv it!
NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
This was a really nice one-shot! :-)
Rasa.Ra chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
That was fun:) enjoyed it much:)
nepalipranshu chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Awwwwwww...the ending was really sweet!
krotoxo chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
ahahaha very cute :)
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
good story. the t-shirt was really cute and so fitting. thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
awww cute story:D
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