Reviews for Explosive
bigherb81 chapter 14 . 2/28
Awesome job on the latest chapter great job on the fallout of Kim's little "episode". Also loved the introduction of Monique very clever way to bring her into the fold. I hope that her and Kim still end up as female besties. Can't wait for the next one.
Fenrisulfr chapter 14 . 2/28
New awesome chapter! Enter the Mo! Love how you made her so friggin' forward! And the interactions between Ron and Kim contra Bonnie and Tara was really interesting, not to mention unexpected Ron and Bonnie! Love the vonurable side of Kim and Taras sudden insight in the consequenses of Ron's extracurricular activities! Keep being awesome Sir S! I will patiently anticipate the next chapters.
Fenrisulfr chapter 13 . 1/31
This might very well be the best KiBo story I have ever read. Maybe even one of the top three KP-fanfics I've come across. The fact that you expand on the existing disney characters brilliantly; like giving Kim a ptsd tick from her missions, is such clever writing and a great tool in making her a more wellrounded and human character than the original. Also your original characters of Renne, Harvey and Brian are all interesting in their own way and fun to read about when you chose to use them. Must say I am partial to Renne due to the personality you gave her and her past (and possibly present) relationship with Ann Possible ;D

Love every sentence of it, lease keep being awesome!
only-looking chapter 13 . 1/6
Oh, so close, and then boom - back to the beginning. Poor Bonnie, poor Kim. I can only imagine what's going through their heads right now.

I just finished reading this story all the way through and I'm absolutely loving it. It was so much fun seing their relationship progress, even if neither of them could say "the thing". You had Bonnie absolutely in character here, and it always makes me happy seeing her grow and mellow out a little.

I'm so glad you're updating this again. I hope you get the opportunity to write some more.
LycanRed chapter 13 . 12/19/2014
It feels like so long since I read the last update, and yet I'm once again sucked right back into it. I started reading this because I was feeling frisky and I'd read all of the Kigo stories I could at the time. Outside of the sexual scenes, which are for the most part more tasteful than other stories of this ilk, this seems like a very believable interpretation of how a relationship between Kim and Bonnie would go. Overall I have a couple of gripes, but it's nothing worth mentioning, and I very much enjoy this story. I can't wait for the next update. Kudos.

Joe Stoppinghem chapter 13 . 12/9/2014
Sure, leave us on a cliffy.

Looks like Kim may have had a bad situation on one of her missions or nightmares afterwards.
Also looks like Bonnie may have been in an abusive relationship.

It was looking like the story was winding down, but just got a second wind.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for keeping this one going.
bigherb81 chapter 13 . 12/5/2014
Well that was definitely an interesting one. I mean a lot of things came to light in this one and I gotta say great job. Love James' reaction to Anne's confession, did that perfectly, I mean everyone acts like "oh my wife cheats with another chick? That's awesome!" No one ever takes a real look at how ego and feelings play into that whole thing. And the end did not see that coming, but at the same time it doesn't surprise me. After everything Ron and Kim have been through it wouldn't surprise me if they both had some flashback problems. So I can't wait for the next chapter to see this one settles.
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 13 . 12/5/2014
Ouch. But then again PTSD is hard for anyone let alone a teenage heroine.
angel-1844 chapter 13 . 12/5/2014
Poor Kim, it seems like it's PTSD. I hope she gets the opportunity to explain to Bonnie. I absolutely love this story and I'm glad you are still going with it, I can't wait to read the next chapter because you left one heck of a cliffhanger!
HairyLimey chapter 13 . 12/5/2014
Ooooh dear...PTSD?
Dietskittles chapter 13 . 12/5/2014
Every chapter has me cracking up. They're so good, but this one, even better. I'm really enjoying the story, can't wait for the next update!
Sapphic Sam chapter 13 . 12/4/2014
/3 D':
bigherb81 chapter 12 . 11/16/2014
Great job on the newest chapter happy that Kim reciprocated her feelings, but things are never that simple. Really looking forward to what you've got planned next for Kim and Bonnie, not to mention Ron and Tara.
Royal Cypher chapter 12 . 11/15/2014
i'm in love with how this story is developing..
gotta admit though, i had to hold my breath every time Kim had to answer Bonnie's feelings..
so all in all, trepidation is my constant companion, 'till your next update.
bjchit chapter 12 . 11/15/2014
Sounds like Mrs. Dr. P. has caught Kim doing a few other things before. Is she ever gonna tell her about her own experiences with the fairer sex? One criticism; the part where Wade says I'm sorry rapidly should have all the I'm capitalized, since they're first person pronouns.
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