Reviews for Murder My Heart
Mr.Me-24 chapter 23 . 4/9
I LOVED IT!
goku2134 chapter 23 . 9/3/2020
Another one of your stories that I definitely loved ! One of my favorite IchiRuki authors of all time now :)
Tai chapter 23 . 8/3/2020
Love this story! All the ups and downs, suspenseful moments! Had such a hard time putting it down, I just wanted to keep reading!
Guest chapter 23 . 7/13/2019
so good!
Izzy chapter 23 . 5/26/2019
Thank you for this amazing story, really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 12 . 12/14/2018
You just had Ichigo issue a rape threat. What. Just what. sigh I was really liking this fic despite it not aging well and I really, really wanted to continue with it but this...this isn't what I signed up for.

Your writing and pace is fantastic and it's truly a shame that I can't continue with this fic..please consider re-writing that dialogue if you can.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/14/2018
Fantastic fic. And really terrific writing. Only problem...I am reading this in the tail-end of 2018 and...ah...your fic hasn't aged well, I am sorry. I don't blame you and I am not flaming you. I am just telling it like it is. In light of, consent unless freely given is not consent at all, and no means no and not convince me, this fic comes across as very non-consensual and...as sexual assault. Just saying. I really do love the pace of the story you have set though.
UselessTeabag chapter 22 . 7/13/2018
!SPOILER!
!READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

I knew it. I wrote in my last review that while reading chapter two I thought Aizen must be the killer. And around 15 chapters later its revealed.
!SPOILER!
!READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

Aizen was the killer all along . I told you. I'm proud of myself now. And now to praising the author. Its a really good story. Its well written and thought out. Keep up the good work.
UselessTeabag chapter 16 . 7/13/2018
I'm only 2 chapters into this story and I already call that Aizen is the murderer. I'll post another review when the murderer is revealed. But its a great story so far.
Leeleechanlee chapter 23 . 2/10/2018
Aaaaawwwww! To AMAZING! I love the ending. I love how that moment of bravery escalated to something true that needed to come out. So awesome, so cute. Poor Rana, I'm glad Rukia helped out the way she did. No wonder she kept pulling at her vest, lol. So awesome! :) Rangiku would be proud. :) Oh, btw, I don't know if I missed it, but whatever happened to Tosen...? lol. I also forgot to mention that in that chapter where Renji doubted Rukia was so much like the original story line and how Ichigo stood by Rukia no matter what. This story has a lot from the original. It's a nice touch. :) Rangiku would of been proud of Rukia for helping Rana out. Yumichika would of been happy to see Rukia much more happier. To bad we did not get to see Shunsui in that court room to witness Aizen going straight to jail. Other then some of these, this story was so lovely and so was Kenpachi's poor self and all the caught losers having to witness Ichigo and Rukia at it. lol. XD I'll be definitely making fan art. Hope you see it one day... Thank you for the lovely story. :) Until next time! :)
Leeleechanlee chapter 22 . 2/10/2018
Aaahhhh... Mother fucking Aizen goes straight to jail, lmao. XD That was so cute how she calls him a crazy bastard as she accepts him as her fiancee. :D 3 So lovely! Right after court, hell yeah I'll marry him, lmao. XD Poor Yama and Kenpachi, lol. That was a cute references of a trio bond between Ichigo, Rukia, and Kenppachi. How she feels safe with both of them. :) So funny and cute. :) T_T So happy. LOVE this chapter!
Leeleechanlee chapter 21 . 2/10/2018
FINALLY! No bs, lol... XD It's about time my girl accepted her happiness. :) 3 That asshole Ulquiorra, lol, he's even cold to that dirt bag, Aizen. lol. That was so awesome how Ichigo was there to support Rukia and how she finally admitted her love to him, in front of a court too, lmao. AWESOME! The shit I live for. I feel like I'm watching Law & Order. :) Love that show and love this chapter, with poor Rukia getting smacked around with the common sense of her relationship with Ichigo. :) Yama can be so one-sided as usual, lol. GREAT CHAPTER.
Leeleechanlee chapter 20 . 2/10/2018
UGH...RUKIA AND HER FRONTING...as usual, lol... Ugh, so mad and sad...poor Ichigo... After all those beautiful reactions between them both... ugh... and that ass wipe Ulquiorra... Poor Ichigo...
Leeleechanlee chapter 19 . 2/9/2018
OMG...! The "I love you." from Ichigo was so cute! Ugh... Her waking up with a SMILE! Ugh... BEAUTIFUL. 3 :D lol, that whole scene with Yama, Ulquiorra and Hitsugaya was perfect and funny. Bitch ass Ulquiorra will be dissapointed, but oh well, lol... XD Such a good chapter. Perfect depiction to how Retsu U. is. :) lol, poor Kenpachi, actually doing work, lmao... XD Onto a trial? :D That hi and smile, highlight of the chapter. :)
Leeleechanlee chapter 18 . 2/9/2018
Ugh, lol, that fire was intense. XD With it being Aizen, I thought he could of wanted more then just killing, but it can work for him too. I love the way this chapter was build. It was all well organised and everything made sense. lol, and we got the answer to the badge, poor Byakuya. :( Poor Rukia, made to cry for Ichigo. Poor Ichigo, almost accepting despair without Rukia. Reminds me of one of their favorite quotes. Awesome chapter. :) Glad Kenpachi got everyone to work. lol.
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