Reviews for Murder My Heart
hotteybobody chapter 23 . 10/13/2015
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mingxingxing chapter 23 . 9/21/2015
everything are great! the ending is perfect! so ichigo and rukia-like! the part when then bomb is dropped... you have it hard, ichigo
YuiLee chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
this is really interesting though I was shock with Byakuya's being q victim in such a gruesome fate.
Jade Rojo chapter 23 . 6/8/2015
oh God.. this was such a beautiful and thrilling ending !

Thank you thank you thank you
Jade Rojo chapter 18 . 6/8/2015
THis chapter has been so damn good.. Really you should be wrinting movies and series.. Youre incredible !
Jade Rojo chapter 16 . 6/8/2015
oh MY FUCKING ... that was too much tension.. I swear.. i was going to hiperventilate at the moment she heard steps in the house...!

i couldn't bread normal for like five minutes after she got to the 31st

that .. and the sexy-angry-sex scene.. wow.. I need a couple of cigars !
Jade Rojo chapter 15 . 6/7/2015
oh .. my .. God !
Jade Rojo chapter 13 . 6/6/2015
awesme.. first ... fu... time... !
Jade Rojo chapter 11 . 6/5/2015
how nerve breaking situation.. Have a delicious Ichigo behing your bones.. all the time...
Jade Rojo chapter 10 . 6/5/2015
oh my .. this ichigo is toxic and dangerous.. yummy...
Jade Rojo chapter 8 . 6/4/2015
The part of Kyoraku telling them to catch the bastard and giving him 5 minutes alone with him.. I love it.. It was also very sad.. but very real...
Jade Rojo chapter 7 . 6/4/2015
oh my oh my oh my...
JoTerry chapter 23 . 5/28/2015
Ah... I'm done. You truly murdered my heart a few times but it's ok. Great job, though! Keep writing!
JoTerry chapter 12 . 5/27/2015
You are seriously murdering my heart with this fic. First, you killed Byakuya and then Rangiku. I don't care so much for Yumichika and Nanao but their deaths were just as heartbreaking. And then I was expecting some awesome Kurosaki family drama for Christmas but you killed Isshin as well! I'm only half-way through this chapter but already I can feel my heart being wrenched right out. How the hell did you do it? *sob*
Sadhaka chapter 9 . 3/28/2015
The hitting him is kinda annoying plus you have her be really abrasive there is like nothing to like about her. Makes reading about her really hard there no connection no like. I like some scenes but most of them are just her being abrasive and rude to from the story someone who really has not done much to her. The second problems is you have your males protagonist as the one who has to do all the bowing and scraping. They meet because he is forced to apologize, they get hooked up as partners because he is forced too. Everything is him going to her and being put on, he really has no place were he shines in this story.
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