Reviews for Visited Upon the Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione Jean Granger! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Battle of Hogwarts was 1st into 2nd of May 1998. Not June 1997. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hogwarts isnt in England, it's in Scotland. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha i know that it seems like such a small insignificant thing but I can’t get over her being called Mia by everyone. It’s just me I’m sure️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mia? Hermione...to Mia? Ok. Also I think a little paragraph of her at her parents graves and paying respects would be nice, just a thought. |
![]() ![]() Seriously? U had him talk sbout apologizing to her about all the “horrible names” he called her in Hogwarts and then in the same chapter u had him think “She's nothing. She just a dirty little mudblood. How can she even compare to my intelligence. I'll show that know it all.” That is just stupidly inconsistent... his apparent wuick shift to racism makes me think he’s not changed enough... especially for a fic with an H recovering from rape by his father with no RW or HP by her side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For a first Dramione, it is amazing , you have a wonderful imagination and it was very interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds a bit annoying, but I don't like Hermione's attitude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for your story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are an amazing author...thank you so much for writing this story...i really love it...this story is one of my favorite dramione story...i like how you keep draco-hermione and others in characters like in the books...please write more dramione... |
![]() ![]() Wow! The feels are simply beautiful. |
![]() ![]() This fic is just fab...you are such a good writer |
![]() ![]() This is such a wonderful story! I have read nearly 4 times already and I find it just... AMAZING! So just make a sequel plz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've already cried about 7 times and I'm not usually an over emotional person. I only cry at the best books as well so congrats. It's my fav fanfic so far and I've almost read all of them. |
![]() ![]() Dobby died. |