Reviews for Sesshomaru's Blackmailed Mistress
TheSweetAngel18 chapter 4 . 1/28/2013
okay im not one to normally comment on chapters in a finished story...i prefer to read it all n then do one big review on the entire thing...but as much as i like ur story i really do its a new twist, just how its portrayed it throwing me off...for lack of better words..

i mean she says that he raped her all the time they were dating, n yet she doesnt seem to tell him, and makes it seem that he was soo good no one could compair that she enjoyed what he did, but she just called it rape. shes saying in her mind how terrible it is, but to him she wont let him have it. now if it was said that she had a problem with confessing out of fear then it wud clear things up. but even b4 this i feel like there is all this hype put into how shes a changed woman she wont take shit from him, and yet shes allowing him to walk all over her. i get that shes the "mistress" for a year, but it doesnt seem like there is a distinction between the reality and what is happening. the reality is that she is the mistress hes trying to win back (but to what idk yet hes married for now so he cant marry her...for now idk what happens yet)...so on his side i can understand his actions in pretending that they never broke up n r just a normal dating couple...but kagome is going along with it as if that is what it is. it feels like a couple that had some bad moments n they are trying to work through it. not the ex-fiance that was tormented by this man, and is now forced to be his for a year to protect her family.
the only time/glimps where i get the feeling of the "supposed plot" of her having issues with him is when she yells at him, and even that isnt saying what shes truly trying to say. and i was hoping that when she said that he made her a monster she would explain to him what she meant b4 she went random on him. and even that was kinda brushed off...he hugged her and then it was alright. i can see him brushing it off but at least she wud still be thinking about it, holding it against him...as she shud. and why wouldnt he be pissed with her father whoreing her off?

blaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh...goooood thing though...i love the idea, and i love sesh's humor that is funny. and kagome being able to kick ass is pretty awesome to hahaha this story has deff got me interested enough to read the rest. so to me i think it is a good story line so far :D

take care!
XxHisLilLoverGirlxX chapter 16 . 12/13/2012
loved it
LadyMakeba chapter 16 . 12/12/2012
Great story
Zerhai Dragonspirit chapter 16 . 11/22/2012
how adorable i love the story!
Lady Black Inu chapter 16 . 11/16/2012
really liked it! u should do a #2!
OrihimeKurosakiInoue chapter 16 . 11/3/2012
Awwwwww This Was Soooooooo Cutee _
XXX-NaughtyFanFictionLover-XXX chapter 16 . 10/30/2012
I loved the ending of this chapter. Great work.
kouga's older woman chapter 16 . 10/28/2012
Perfect ending! Thank you!
lakeya2700 chapter 16 . 10/28/2012
Bravo on a story well done
Silver Unicorn Blood chapter 16 . 10/28/2012
Love it update please
XXX-NaughtyFanFictionLover-XXX chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I have to say this story is becoming very intriguing. Great chapter :0)
Megan Consoer chapter 15 . 7/2/2012
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
lakeya2700 chapter 15 . 6/22/2012
loved this chapter update soon.
OrihimeKurosakiInoue chapter 15 . 6/17/2012
Awwww , That Wass Cutee Hee Wass Gonna Proposee Then Shee's Likee Nahh I Want A Mariachi Bandd xD Great Chap c;

Updatee Soon !
kouga's older woman chapter 15 . 6/17/2012
Lovin it! Need more! Please!
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