That was absolutely beautiful

so cute! I love when they realize Katara and Zuko are mom and dad!

This was perfect. The way you portrayed Katara, giving and giving until she has nothing less to give, was by far one of the best portrayals of her I'd ever read.

OMG. OMG. OMG.

I don't know what to say. I don't know what I can say. Other than this: amazing. Simply, incredibly amazing.

I give it a thousands thumbs up

You characterized Katara so beautifully! Loved the way you wrote it, especially from Zuko's POV.

Fantastic

This is amazing and makes my Zutara heart swoon (especially that last line right there- you did that on purpose, didn't you?)! Loved it loved it loved it. Thanks for a wonderful story.

This was a beautifully written piece... and has really been good medicine for my rotten day. Thank you.

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!
i cry a waterfall.
this is so brilliant! it has so much meaning, so much emotion.
you should totally continue this!
the war ends, they win, and Zuko and Katara get married and DID have kids on their own!
but nonetheless, its awesome, really.
you left us wanting for more you lil- xD

Absolutely the most amazing one-shot ever. Funny, engaging, and extremely well-written. I literally shed some tears back in the middle of the story there. But it still has a touch of humor that makes my laugh out loud. This is one of the most heart-warming stories I have ever read, and it is one of those stories I will be able to read over and over again. You should definitely write more one-shots, because you are obviously talented in it. I love this story! Amazing job!

Absolutely amazing story.

And not too light or dark skin!

I usually don't like such short stories, but this one really touched my heart.

That...was so effin deep...and yea you wrote this a millenia ago but GOD IS THIS BEAUTIFUL!

Thank you so so so much.

-Cries in despair because WHY DIDN'T THEY GET TOGETHER!?

rxs

This is so beautiful! Fantastic job!