i love this one. i think it's so beautifully written and the details were just lovely. you're a wonderful writer, and i wish i could write just like you. :))

well, this story was freaking AMAZING.

and the whole mother/father thing just seems so perfect, and so obvious now that i've read this story.

still, this story is definitely one of my favorites. and you're just freaking awesome for writing it!

I just found this and am glad I did. Beautifully written.

Wow that was really good. You have a real talent for wrighting.

I love it. Keep up the good work.

That was really beautiful. I really enjoyed it. You have a wonderful way with words. It's like they are woven together with a thread, as it moves from scene to scene. Very poignant. Instant favourite.

I just found this story. It's awesome. The ending gave me goosebumps!

I love this. It is really, really, really, good you are a brilliant writer this is one gemstone of a writting keep it up.

Soo beautiful! I really liked this piece, it is simply so... Well, I dunno. But really amazing. Love it!

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Oh you oneshot is just... wow.

One of the best Zutara fic I've read (and I've read a lot- I'm a no-life hehe). I like the implicit way you say things, the zuko centric sensible point of view, and the Katara's not-so-dramatic acceptance of Zuko.

Yeah, a lot of words to say: It's really nice.

This was really good (it made me smile big). And adorable. And quite frankly, it's easy to imagine Zuko as the dad. Keep up the good work!

*cries* I just love fluff!

It was in that second—that single second—that he closed his eyes and imagined children with black hair and oceanic blue eyes.

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*_*~ nyah~

OMG SQUE! I love the voice this piece has-just the right amount of philosophical musing interspersed with narrative. *sigh* faved!

Wow.

I can't say how incredible this was. The slow why you developed it and built it up, the motifs, the imagery, Katara's words and Zuko's thoughts... it was simply amazing. I love the truth in this, the pictures and the metaphors you've used to explore their relationship. Insightful, touching, and poignant. Thank you for sharing.

I read this story a long time ago and I have been deperately searching for it again ever since. This story is one of my all time favourites and has been a huge inspiration to me in writting my own fanfiction, although I don't think I will ever be up to this standard