Reviews for Twenty Eight Days of Twelve Steps Back
Cortana49 chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
That was interesting, treating her "sadistic lightning" as an addiction. I'm not sure it's entirely applicable, though. The lightning on its own doesn't hurt anyone, rather it's Elle's sadistic urges that should be addressed. I can't see how using her powers, just on their own, would be harmful to anyone. I mean, if Peter can use his mindreading power in a constructive way when they're on their own, why not Elle?

And I'm addicted to pain. Literal pain, I mean. I've tried cold turkey and I can relate to the general sentiment here. I wouldn't say I got over it, so much as learned to regulate it.
BroodBoy chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
that was really good.

i like that way your wrote it.

and i related since i've just quit smoking and all.

but keep up the good work.:]
Celeste chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
That was amazing. I love how you portrayed Elle in this story. Trying to get better, overcoming an addiction. Amazing. Write more Elle/Peter stories!