Reviews for Betrayed
Kitfox Warrior chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
somewhat of an emo story but it seems to fit so well.
Arceus the Creator chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
very sad
Starling Short chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
I really liked this oneshot. Oneshots are pretty difficult, at least I think so, and the perspective you took the story from was quite interesting. Bravo also on using first person. :D

Great job! I hope you write more~
Toshiro Lover chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I love it! So sad :(
anna chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
She didn't actually die, but she almost did. I hate Aizen so much. When we dissected frogs in science I named mine after him.
Lakaminee chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
I guess in this one-shot, hinamori is kind of thick-headed. Why should she die? Hitsugaya is still there for her, ready to help her and support her, as a friend, as family. Why can't she see that? Hitsugaya cares for her so much, yet she belittles it in a way because all she really cares about right now is Aizen's betrayal and how she wants to die... I mean she was really loyal to him but Hitsugaya is her childhood friend, someone who always stayed by her side... I call that being thick-headed... but I still feel bad for Hinamori anyway because she gave so much loyalty to Aizen yet he killed her with a sadistic glee. DAMN AIZEN, TEME!
Stelra Etnae chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
So sad... I almost cried... *sniff*
boygenius1220 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I'm sorry but I hate Momo so stories where she dies excite me! xD
Yaraia chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
That was sad and touching and beautifully written. Poor Hinamori...
Shrugs chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Beautifully written, I've always wanted to write something like this, only from Hitsugaya's point of view.
Invisible Observer 813 chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
This was a great one-shot. I love all of the works that you have put up so far. Please continue to write. This one was different but it was still great.