Reviews for Naruto, dobe, dropout, idiot, jinchuriki, hero
Th 1998 chapter 13 . 10/31/2014
okay first without the demonic chakra of the fox there would be know way for Naruto to win or survive and second what is it with Ino being violent al the time. somebody who is loneley and depressed only get sadder from such a behavior belive me I know it
Th 1998 chapter 12 . 10/31/2014
a you fucking kidding me he is a Ninja, I mean do you even Know what Ninja do if you want to give Naruto this personalitie you would have to mack him a Samurai because an Ninja who acts like Naruto acts is disgusting
Sailor Pandabear chapter 29 . 10/18/2014
interesting but it looks like it died?
animefreak2019 chapter 29 . 9/2/2014
plz finish
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 29 . 7/31/2014
Okay hope abiru dies, hope Ino gets saved and she and Naruto end up together, idk about tenten or Temari. Plz continue!
anonamus chapter 21 . 7/6/2014
so far your story was one of the best iv read so far but you crossed the line killing ino
From The Depths Of Fear chapter 29 . 7/5/2014
This is a great story i only just found it but you seem to have left the story for a long time four years now i am wondering if there is any chance you will be back?
Guest chapter 29 . 5/8/2014
wheres the new chapter
kalel201125 chapter 29 . 1/6/2014
PLEASE FINISH IT BECAUSE I RELLY ENJOY IT SO FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE FINISH
storyficsmith chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
please continue this story it is really good !
storyficsmith chapter 29 . 7/19/2013
you should continue Naruto, dobe, dropout, idiot, jinchuriki, hero it is a really good story
kyuubi bunshin15 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
you update in the next 2 weeks or i will tell anyone that looks at my wall to start skipping over your stories it has been just under 2 years heck im a bad writer and i could probably hashed out 2 stories each 60 chapters long in the time since you last updated
Chaoticboy19 chapter 29 . 3/22/2013
pls update soon this is a really interesting fanfic
Wolfone10 chapter 12 . 12/24/2012
OMG, you made Naruto MORE of a masochist then he is in canon...I mean seriously it's not bravery to WANT to die especially in A fricking rank EXAM.. That's just STUPID!.. The whole Oorchi thing is one thing, but to continue to compete with your guts hanging out, let alone being ALLOWED to compete.. I mean it's NOT anything more then basically an exhibition match... As for PROTECTING people?.. FLIMSY excuse...Stay in the watchers box and help out if things get outta control...
Wolfone10 chapter 10 . 12/24/2012
You do KNOW oorchi is SUPPOSED to be doing "stick and move" tactics on these people right? A prolonged battle between TWO teams in the heart of the village where he is hated seems a BIT much...One team?.. Well that's already been shown is a "yes"... Two?.. With unknown amounts of other genin in the forest and ANBU deffinatly coming to investigate after the power levels shown here were thrown around... SOOO... Anyway congrats on not doing something silly like giving Naruto the curse mark.. Those fics are really silly.
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