Reviews for Aim, Snap, Fall
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
I like the speculative nature of this one shot. It explores Adam's view of himself and Hiro quite nicely.
The Famous Fire Lady M chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I like it.

Like I said with your other one, I'm not normally a HiroAdam shipper, but your writings are really good.
HanuuEshe chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I loved this. It was so heartbreaking and agonizing and real. God, I wish they'd touch on this in the show.
KingOfTheRock chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
So brilliant and angstfull, just like your other fic.

My kingdom for you to write another Adan fic, about the time before he came to Japan and met Hiro.
Tsurai Shi chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
So sad and wonderful! A good fic, especially the ending. This gives a lot of incentive for me to finally get on with my own Hiro/Kensei...

Keep on with the fantastic writing!

-Tsurai
E.A. Knightly chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
holy shit! this makes me want to cry!

~Elyn