Don't worry, I'm a perv too... :P... and your sex scenes are INCREDIBLE! I don't think I could ever write one like THAT, let alone actually WRITE ONE! You see, I have a phobia, too.

i think were all perverts inside

:D

-hides as well-

Ehehe! So much schmexy man sex xD Ah I love it.

Please update soon. ] Its my birthday on the 27th, update for me? Heh, more reading of lemons on my birthday is always fun 3

Anyway, awesome fic. PS; *bows down to you* your lemons make me happy xD

Love,

LustAndVengeance

first i have to say that your lemons are amazing really they are and well i cant wait for the next to come, hahahah come, any ways um well to say the truth im not really into L being bottom its like a phobia of mine to but hey as long as its just like once and after that L gets to be seme again im willing to give it a try at reading it cause who nows you might make me get over my "fears" hahaha :)

God, this is sexy. I rarely read DN-fanfiction, because I've never been able to find any good ones, but this... This gives me hope. x3

Your writing style is really good, your grammar is close to flawless (I've seen some misspellings, but they were few enough to ignore), and the sex is... Really. fucking. hot.

There are some places though, where the scentences are cut in half. In this chapter, and also somewhere in the previous. It'd be good if you checked it up, because it makes it a bit difficult to follow.

Anyway, I can't wait to read more of this, and most of all to find out if Raito really has something to do with Kira or not. I really hope he don't.. .

I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D (And in the meantime checking out the rest of your stories.. x3)

-S

Now you my dear friend, are an absolutely splendid writer. I was feeling a bit over lxlight fics, but this fic has very certainly made me love this pairing again. Please update soon, I will be waiting :D

“What about sex in a bath?” XD This amde me laugh so hard!

And Matusda was funny too.

Kay what to say: This WAS amazingly hot! I LOVE this!

The jokes were funny, the smex was awesome and hot, L being jealous was SO cute, and this chapter was just so gold!

Not that the first and third aren't 'cause they are! I lvoe this story even if it makes me seem like a pervert! XDD

And I like that you don't use the d' word and cock. Those words just don't sound romantic to me, so your elmons are a reat change from other fics.

Keep up the awesome work!

~Kitty (LxLight Lover)

Hot guys in a shower..What more can you ask for? xD

Well, I can't wait until the next chapter! Things are getting juicy! Well, update soon!

Aw...their relationship is progressing. And Mikami enters...he is a creepy bastrd isn't he? And I LOVED that ice cream scene, it was so funny. Hope you can update soon!

gah! you made me nosebleed all over my headphones! -fake pout- oh well, when life gives you lemons... pray to the gods of jelly it's written by you! awesome job and i hope you update soon, please? d...b

I liked it! Ya, let the boy dream! L owns Raito!;P Can't wait for you to update ROH, both of these stories are really really good and I cna't wait to see where you'll take them!

Gah, all your stories are just so hot! And the shower scene...*_*

I'm glad to read a multi-chapter DN fic that's not an angst (they are good, but humour once in a while is a must!) fic, so I absolutely adore this fic. Can't wait

Also, a note on Raito/L sex scene, I never read any of those before (lol, I have an uke-L phobia too XD), since Raito seems more like an uke to me _ However, since you are writing it, I guess I will give it a try

WOW! I love this story. I liked how Teru camin you made me laugh! Keep up the great work! Update soon.

Very nice :] The introduction of Teru made me laugh... and I can't wait to see how he goes about his stalking of Raito - and of course, a jealous L is a wonderful bonus. Heh, and Raito's... Raito-ness made me laugh... absolutely no sex in public places... even if no one happens to be there. I must say... this porn sure does have quite a bit of plot to it ::gasp:: Loved it.

xoxox

~Ruu

awsome i'm so glad u put Teru in the story even tho i like L X light but Teru is still pretty awsome