First of all, I this fic is very well-writtne. I love th bits of poetry, the dialougue between L and Light, and the quote war was hilarious. And the sex was scenes were delicious.

But the one thing that really made me laugh was that, in the middle of a rough-play hot'n'heavy sex scene, you used the word 'tummy'. XD I laughed so hard I hiccuped.

Hmm, if you're this good at writing sex, I have to check out what else you've read...

Yay, awesomest one shot ever!... Yay, awesomest's not a word!

I'm glad that I'm your first review. Let me just say that I really liked it, I'm a big fan of uke Raito (especially when he's still a strong willed person). I really think you did a good job with their personalities. Hope to see more of your work.

Truthfully, this is the best Christmas present I could ever recieve. Damn, it was hot! I understand your need to keep it a oneshot because it has good impact on it's own, but it would make quite a sexy multi-chapter fic!