Reviews for Those Left Behind
themagebear chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
you capture everyones personality very well. however, the magebear is certain the age gap between sue and shin is much less than 8 years. shin is barely 20, at most, during fuuin, which would make him a little over 10 during this story. yes, the magebear knows those numbers dont add up. the magebear never saw an exact age for shin, so its approximating, covering the youngest to oldest.
Kitten Kisses chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
Hmm...pretty interesting. Even though I don't care for Rath (and know next-to nothing about Shin and Sue), I read this anyway. First of all, you wrote it, and secondly, it ties in with Days of Waiting. I'm interested to see how exactly this all fits together, though I can almost see it already.

I wouldn't even call it one-sided Rath/Lyndis, because he only speaks wistfully of her for a moment.

The point of view was interesting, and the ending was vague, but also very sad- poor Sue. I hope to read more from you, soon.

(I hope everything is going fine on your trip, also!)

Cheers,

-Manna