Reviews for Little Girl Lost
Sophia Prester chapter 1 . 9/10/2001
This is so sweet! You got me completely hooked at the beginning with Serenity almost looking like Usagi as she slipped and almost fell. That was a good way of showing us that this was Crystal Tokyo, but not quite the Crystal Tokyo of the 30th Century. One thing I would have liked to have seen a little more of is just how Crystal Tokyo relates to the rest of Japan,(you say it's a city state of some sort), especially since there seems to be a Japanese government and there is trouble with China. It's not essential, however, as this story still stands nicely on its own. On the other hand, it seems like you could easily make this part of a larger fic if you cared to do so. Nice work.
Immeblue chapter 1 . 9/9/2001
I loved this fic, it was great how u showed us the way Small Lady met Puu & got Lunz P. ;-)
Initial A chapter 1 . 9/8/2001
Oooooooooooooooooooooo! You have to make more! This story was SO amusing!
nudge99 chapter 1 . 9/8/2001
i loved your fic!
Jellicatso chapter 1 . 9/8/2001
Cool...I like it! _
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