Reviews for Tifa, It's Cold Outside
adxlunam chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Pretty please write more? Pretty pretty please with whatever you want on top?
the real Marik Ishtar chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
nice story...i like it
ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
I LOVED THE STORY! I know it doesn't matter my opinion since you're planning on deleting it, but I loved it!
Gwilwileth chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
Hey there!

Well, I see what you obviously dislikes about this fic, and I must say I myself prefer IC writing, but as you said it was still one of your first experiments as writer. Therefore, I disagree with this "Ms. Freeze" person when he/she/it/whatever spare time on sendind these harsh words... He/she/it/whatever probably must be a complexed kid.

((and wtf is with the "forest fire" thing? ... o_o ))

About the story problems, you could see it from two points of view; first, there are public that loves OOC, clichès, and some ppl who might have the same ideas as you had by the time this was written; second, from your own experience and progress in writing, you might see this as a black spot in your development historic and wouldn't like to have it associaed with your image as writer.

In the first case, you could keep this fic up with a decent and polite text explaining that you are aware of it's fails and whatever else you may think is needed.

In the second case scenario, it could get reaally interesting for you aand for the readers if you challenge yourself to write this story again, but totally IC and with all your knowledge in writing. I mean, keep the concept (the "it's cold outside" theme and this as the start of the event), but this time with a believeble script. It can be enjoyable for readers and a chance to grow as writer learning and sensing your development.

I hope you don't just take the fic down, it can even inspirate you ng writers to know that everybody has problems in the start, and that mistakes help us to get better.

Gwil.
Sono chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
The first reviewers enjoyed it, some even asked for a sequel. _

So, in the end, it's really your choice, cuz you're the writer MKL! Good job on this Fic, even though it was posted without your consent. With good reason, cuz you had ppl enjoy it, and I was one of them.

Make a sequel out of this, great! Get rid of it, fine. Lol. What I have to say about it, stands firm still. If you like to write, then KEEP writing, you'll get better amd better each time. This is my second and last review. Good luck with your other stories, hun!

God Bless!
FREEZE2 chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
Sono is fucking retard that missed the point by 5235 miles. If it's OOC than the author has failed, if the plot goes against canon and characterization then it's an original fic with OC's, not fanfiction(The "It's FANficton because it's written by FANS" is bullshit, lacks logic and shows that the moron who said this has no clue of what fanfiction really is). If an author don't like the readers reviews then they shouldn't write! Or better if they can't be bothered/or are unable to keep the characters IC or follow canon then they should step off the computer and do something else.
Sono chapter 2 . 3/12/2009
Ok... what? Just because of one stinkin' flame, you're gonna take down your story? First off, you as a writer should know that not everyone's gonna like your ideas. There are going to be some that will find it stupid. Err, not that it is, cuz I actually liked it.

Yes, there were some seemingly OOCness, but hey. Nobody knows for sure how Sephiroth would act if he had the hotts for someone. None of the games show him being intimate with anyone. So what do some of these haters know about Sephiroth's love life, huh? Lol. He never had one. And it's mostly preferred that the characters stay the way they are, but like I said it's YOUR story. If they don't like it, they don't have to read it. And if they leave you a nasty flame before they leave, don't pay any mind, just delete. BUT... if you, yourself, don't even like the story, then get rid of it already. Don't waste time keeping it here for another week. What is the point of that?

Well, that's all really. Hope you take what I said into consideration. Hang in there. _~ God bless.

Adios~
Kaj-Nrig chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
Hm... well, some pretty harsh words.

However, you speak of this story as if all your other stories are somehow infinitely better than it, when in truth, that is not the case.

For instance, this story shares the same sort of haphazard spelling and grammar as your other stories; you spell the words as if you didn't even bother to look them up in a dictionary... which you probably didn't. I don't even think you performed a spell-check.

If you had, you would've noticed that "tentively" and "occupents" and "impared" aren't words. Even in your other fics, you have problems with mundane words like "secratary" (from "The Truth Behind Xehanort") and "monstrocity" (from "The Breakup Plan") that could easily be fixed simply by applying a spell checker.

In the same way, characterization is very shoddy, though less so in your other stories than in here. To your credit, you recognized the characters as such and made it a point to let us know. Still, though, you could have (and likely should have) replaced names and the story would have been better off.

Another of the biggest issues you have is pacing. There are parts where it's obvious you just sorta want to get everything out in the open (like in your god-awful pre-story notes). While there's nothing wrong with establishing context, it helps to know how much to reveal to the audience off the bat. Makes things much more believable.

In all fairness, though, your writing isn't actually bad. It's obvious that you're progressing in terms of writing style and maturity and whatnot - your descriptions are becoming more varied, your sentences are becoming more and more distinct from "generality," etc. With that in mind, one shouldn't harp on you so much as keep you constantly aware.

Anyway, there isn't much you're likely to take away from this, so I'll leave it at that. Good luck on the rest of your writing.
Broken Anzaran chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
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Ms. Freeze chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
LOL WHUT? This has to be one of the most 'shittiest' and failtastic stories out there! Sephiroth is painfully OOC, he (and the remnants too for that matter) is a psychopathic murderer, not a "dangerous" gentleman that likes to hand out dumbass compliments to people that are considered to be his enemies. Poor Tifa is portrayed as brainless school girl that just thinks Sephiroth is soo OMG so hot! I don't mind different pairings at all, but if you're going to write them, keep them IN CHARACTER FOR FUCK'S SAKE! If you can't write them IC, why the hell are you writing them at all?Because they looks so OMGkewl!1 together? You've got no talent in writing at all. Apart from the blatant OOC(Writing the charas OOC means that you fail as a writer, dickwad), the story itself is so full with clichés and canon abuse that I just wanted to vomit. Preferably on you. BTW AU does NOT mean that it's okay to fuck up the characters. Please do the world a favor and jump into a HUGE forest fire.
KCVII chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Sequel please~

This is love. xD
ToxicInsanity chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
i hope u do a sequel yeah this was very interesting yeah
Enigma chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
I would love you for an eternity if you made a sequal XD love the story though X3 cant wait for the update X3
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
very sweet!