Reviews for Harry Potter and The Trust |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() Aaaaand, that's it. Good work! I wish you had finished it. Oh well. |
![]() ![]() Too late, I know, but I really don't like thinking Neville might have to be killed. |
![]() ![]() Pretty dang cool! (If I can steal that saying from that "Gas Monkey Garage" dude.) |
![]() ![]() Don't you "order" books from Flourish and Blotts when you're not in the book store? If you're there, in store, why order books to be delivered. A firstie doesn't know enough to exceed what is already on the shelves. Sirius and Harry sat there, in the hospital wing, for the rest of the day? Why? I mean, yeah. If he really was eleven, fine. But he's not. |
![]() ![]() I always imagined, fueled by the fact that most of ficdom sets Hermione's birthday as September 19, that Hermione received her "visit" from McGonnagall on that day, literally TEN months before Hagrid visited Harry. Supposedly, you get your letter on your 11th birthday, no matter what. I don't know if the cutoff date is August 1st or slightly after, but Hermione is barely six weeks from being in the year before Harry. Similarly, Ginny is only two or three weeks younger than Harry, but is in the year behind him. |
![]() ![]() Common theory, or, one of them, about Dumbledore and Gellert Grindewald, is that Albus shot him, with a muggle gun, after they had slept together one last time. First of all "Ewww!" Gay is supposedly acceptable nowadays, but old people, wrinkly, grey, gay, old people? Gross! (If Dumbles is 115 in 1995, then he was 65 in 1949 at the end of WWII. Also, they were 'lovers' back in the early 1900s). So, yeah. Eww! I mean, I don't even want to see what would be considered as an "attractive" 65 year old woman, naked! Maybe not "gross", but no thank you, anyway. |
![]() ![]() I like the kitty. I think Harry's animagus form should be a panther. In most cases. Your ... I forget... Hawk? Falcon? Is cool, too. |
![]() ![]() Being from the future, as I would seem to be from the author's perspective (I'm reading in Sept. 2024. You wrote in '08 or '09?), and also an Ohioan, I am not sure about your A/N before this chapter. What did Ohio do in 2008 that would affect Texans? Is it Obama related? Was there some kind of anti-redneck, legislative thing, that had far reaching results? Lol. (or, somehow outlawed dragging minorities behind pickup trucks?) I'll have to try to Google 2008 and see what was happening. I will say, in advance, if it has anything to do with Ted Cruz, or your future ('24) Governor, F*** them! |
![]() ![]() No, no, no, no, NO! DAMN IT! Not UP! The ministry Atrium is the TOP floor with each progressive floor number getting deeper UNDER ground. The lifts go DOWN nine floors. Smaller court rooms and the D.O.M. are on nine, courtroom 10 is down one more set of stairs, on level TEN. There is no UP from the Atrium. That's only for stupid sonsabitches that only ever watched the MOVIES and never cracked even one book, before attempting fanfiction! Movies are not Canon! BOOKS are Canon! Even one 'lumos maxima" and I quit reading, and mail you bubotuber pus! |
![]() ![]() And again... dressing young boys like girls, against their will,cough imperius cough, is nothing new to Albus. I sure hope we're going to diverge from the 'past' Harry Ginny crap, and maybe put him with Hermione, Susan, or Daphne. No Luna, she's just too out there for me. I want to barf when I think Harry would sleep with Ginny. Hell, KISSING her is abhorrent! |
![]() ![]() Sadly, that wasn't the first time a young boy had been escorted to Albus' bathtub. At least this time, he did not join the boy. |
![]() ![]() What other half beaten, completely starved, dirty, abused child could possibly know your floo address, Albus too many titles Dumbleschmuck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for reminding of Harry’s split existence. Great job skipping the angst over Harry’s true age. great job showing Sirius mental gyrations. |