Reviews for Kite |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The oyster metaphor was lovely, and so true as well. I like to believe that the world is like an oyster. In the aftermath of turmoil, they way humanity joins together to overcome it is truly beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW, I thought you got Lyra down really well |
![]() ![]() This is still - three years later - one of my favourite stories on this site. |
![]() ![]() And so another jewel is given to us. This is a true work of art, a worthy story for the bards and the dead alike to tell. The bards for the living, so that we may remember to live; and the dead to tell for the harpies, so that they may live again. I only hope the stories I tell can match such beauty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. Simply awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was just as wonderful a job as "Merman". Please, please, please grace us with another story. In *any* category :) And U2 is my favorite band, so you get bonus points for the title. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was . .. that was amazing. Excellent and beautifully written. . . amazing. I loved it. The descriptive passages where wonderful. . .and Lyra was. . well, it was all in Philip Pullman style. . .amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfully, eerily twisted. I like how you use Lyra and Will to help other people. This is beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Celerity, you are REALLY good at this. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said this wasn't original? *raises eyebrow* I beg to differ. |
![]() ![]() *sniffs* Wow, that was just as beautiful as Merman. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() Very nice. I liked it, anyhow. There were some nice touches in L's world, like her being a scholar of literature, and the Alethiometrists needing to attend court cases which I thought were very good. Also, loved the theme of letting go of the past as a way to the future...:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I loved it. It was very interesting. You have great skill. Keep writing! |