Reviews for Kite
McShizzleSupreme778 chapter 1 . 7/26/2021
The oyster metaphor was lovely, and so true as well. I like to believe that the world is like an oyster. In the aftermath of turmoil, they way humanity joins together to overcome it is truly beautiful.
fabbiosa chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
WOW, I thought you got Lyra down really well
ceres wunderkind chapter 1 . 11/24/2004
This is still - three years later - one of my favourite stories on this site.
bard's soul chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
And so another jewel is given to us. This is a true work of art, a worthy story for the bards and the dead alike to tell. The bards for the living, so that we may remember to live; and the dead to tell for the harpies, so that they may live again. I only hope the stories I tell can match such beauty.
Lady Rebecca chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
Wonderful. Simply awesome.
Dala1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2001
That was just as wonderful a job as "Merman". Please, please, please grace us with another story. In *any* category :)

And U2 is my favorite band, so you get bonus points for the title.
Twilight and Silence chapter 1 . 10/12/2001
That was . .. that was amazing. Excellent and beautifully written. . . amazing. I loved it. The descriptive passages where wonderful. . .and Lyra was. . well, it was all in Philip Pullman style. . .amazing.
Niam Ryat chapter 1 . 10/10/2001
Wonderfully, eerily twisted. I like how you use Lyra and Will to help other people. This is beautiful.
Silent Thunder1 chapter 1 . 9/30/2001
Celerity, you are REALLY good at this. Keep it up.
ophelietta chapter 1 . 9/30/2001
You said this wasn't original? *raises eyebrow* I beg to differ.
Reba chapter 1 . 9/22/2001
*sniffs* Wow, that was just as beautiful as Merman. I loved it!
SkywaterBlue Too lazy sorry chapter 1 . 9/21/2001
Very nice. I liked it, anyhow. There were some nice touches in L's world, like her being a scholar of literature, and the Alethiometrists needing to attend court cases which I thought were very good. Also, loved the theme of letting go of the past as a way to the future...:)
Lilanthe chapter 1 . 9/21/2001
Wow. I loved it. It was very interesting. You have great skill. Keep writing!