Reviews for Innocent But Guilty
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
A great story. Very well written.
Sybretooth chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
beautiful.

And I love your title.
hobgoblinn chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
This is nicely written- the short opening sentences and paragraphs give it a certain rhythm, not unlike the beating of a drum for the dead. I can't bring to mind what that's called, but it's very atmospheric. The very snarky sarcastic comments that he can't help but sneak in, even in the midst of his grief are also quite good.

You've got a couple of typos - Dumbledore should always be spelled with the final "e", for instance.

And I wasn't quite sure who the small boy was at the end, though your description there was quite nice.

But on the whole, a very well done piece of work. Thanks for sharing it.
Ormandria chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Like it? Are you JOKING? I LOVE IT!

It is one of the most wonderfully and beautifully written pieces concerning Snape's thoughts and attitude surrounding Dumbledore's death that I have read!

You kept him WONDERFULLY in character!

It is absolutely BRILLIANT! Keep up the good work!
PeterFrankParker chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
If this had actually happened, then I am happy that Snape was able to say goodbye.