Reviews for Helaine's inner girlyness
Thunderbolt2012 chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
This don't seem like Helaine is showing her inner girlyness. It's more like her inner Eremin, becuase she acts just as mean and nasty as Eremin would have been.
helainewarrior chapter 2 . 7/2/2011
I dont see the inner girlyness...
Bane-Treller chapter 2 . 11/24/2008
UPDATE!
Bane-Treller chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
pretty good, has some mystery
GoldenMerlin chapter 2 . 2/16/2008
To be honest, you're in definite need of a beta reader...many grammar mistakes. Also, you've sort of stereotyped Helaine...Yes, she does have a temper, yes, she is very prideful, but there's more to her than that. Other than that the story's fine, and interesting.
mattmanyah chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
i like the idea of ure story but when r u going to up date it i want updates plz