Reviews for Alexandra Quick and the Thorn Circle
Majerus chapter 4 . 2/28/2020
I thought for a moment that "Besides Witch Apple" was a type of pie, not
Besides "Witch Apple" pie
I was contemplating how it would make something 'beside' (or besides?) a witch and... then I figured it out :p

It's odd that you chose to go with Muggles instead of No-Maj.

The Dean seems fairly antithetical to Dumbledore. I'm hoping that this is a good thing.
majere4 chapter 3 . 2/28/2020
Oh shite... Well, if she hadn't lost her friends before this, I'm sure that disappearing wall not make things any better.
majere4 chapter 2 . 2/28/2020
Craaaaaap!
majere4 chapter 1 . 2/28/2020
I've wondered over here at the recommendation of the Sinister Man (I highly recommend his story, "HP and the Prince of Slytherin").
This was a very intriguing opening. Looking forward to more :-)
b.arthur.gilmore chapter 29 . 2/18/2020
Thank you for such a good read. I love what you've done with the Fidulus Charm, you think like a wizard. On the topic of the magic system of harry potter, I would like to note that food cannot be conjured or transfigured, according to Gamps Fifth Law, as described in the seventh book of the original series. It's a mostly minor detail, but it did pull me out of the story for a bit.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2020
Please do readers the courtesy of noting in the summary that these fics actually have nothing at all to do with Harry Potter, only the fanfic universe of the same name. I feel...duped.
Needlepaws chapter 23 . 12/24/2019
Yikes!
Needlepaws chapter 19 . 12/24/2019
Lol the dean is straight up gaslighting her.
Needlepaws chapter 15 . 12/24/2019
Imagine making a genuine mistake in chemistry or somthing and getting sever burns, and then getting sent to the abusive principal for it where she makes you cry.
Needlepaws chapter 11 . 12/23/2019
I don't think she's trying to kill her but God, why does the dean work with children?
astolfo83 chapter 29 . 12/23/2019
I read through your series this last week. Best series I've read with an OC in HP!
Splendid world building and superb character development! Loved every minute of it and I hope you finish the series!
Caver Floyd chapter 29 . 12/21/2019
Good story.

Anna being the stereotypical Asian was kind of cringy, but I guess it’s a stereotype for a reason.
Agapostemon chapter 29 . 11/26/2019
Well this is great. Can't believe I haven't read it before! I love your characterizations - Alexandra starts the story like a real eleven-year-old and she ends it like a real twelve-year-old. She grows, but she still feels like a child and that is just so magical.

Great work.
Alkalach chapter 8 . 11/22/2019
So she hates that she doesn’t know anything but the only things she reads is about magical creatures... of course she will not know anything
Kyle chapter 27 . 11/20/2019
Sorry but 'natural leader' when she can't even lead herself? ROFLMAO.

I'm sorry but I'm laughing so much I can't think of anything else to say except the talk radio hosts are right. You loonies DO live in an alternate reality found only in your heads.
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