Reviews for The Shiver
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19
this is... strange. The smut's good, but the grammar could use some enormous improvements. You're, not your, in several places, and their, instead of there. Also, too, not to. Sometimes.
unknoen reader chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
It was not good or bad it was great
Shady-Mania95 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
oh shit i just can't
Vampchick2010 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
nice one, sanji is a sneaky one. not that zoro minds.
johnnyrocketlove chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
yum! you totally turned me on!
Macaroon chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
you succeeded in turning me on lol
WhimsyUsagi chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Oh, god, yes, you did xD thank you for the meal :D
stranger chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
very hot! :) a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing to ruin the story
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
That was great
Mystery chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Sexy! :D
Uke zoro chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
More zoro/sanji coupling please. I just can't get enough of that couple! Especially when zoro is the Uke "smirk".
Midori no Kaori chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
soo goood! Zoro was so sexy! Wished he was more noisy! hehe XP
Kami Takai chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I think this story went bad when you put menstration. What? is his nipples bleeding or somthing? Teh! You migh wana fix that. It was funny though.
CaptainGoldilocks chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
lol "Sanjis menstruation" :p
M-python-girl chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
This was a charming little fic, even with its... strangeness. Zoro getting pinned by Sanji's legs I can see, but the wrist thing? But it was a good story so... Whatever Plot Points. Your spelling is very good, though I noticed a couple slips (bitter vs biter). And keep your theres straight, our language has three for a reason. But besides all of those very minor thing it was a great fic.
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