|Reviews for Champion of a Dark God|
| WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 1/22
Interesting. Was Harry's growth during training due to the training or due to Chaos infusing him? I wonder what Serina will think of Harry...and if she will have any surprises for him?
| Inflamora Notoris chapter 4 . 2/4/2012
This is interesting...
I can't wait to see more
| Thorfaxdragonkin chapter 4 . 11/8/2011
Very nice just like the others of your i liked.
| Niwaki chapter 4 . 11/7/2010
wasn't Rakhad killed with a killing cyrse in one of the first chapters?
| jbfritz chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
| stwar chapter 2 . 5/27/2010
more more i wont to see the Dark Gods armys and demons in harry p time and to make it his that is an ida
| kratak chapter 4 . 5/22/2010
Never played Warhammer but find that I don't need to be familiar with it to enjoy this story. It's well written and has a pretty good pace to it. But since it's been 2 years since you've updated something tells me that hoping for an update would be rather pointless, however I subscribe to this story in case I am proven wrong.
| smexyforever chapter 4 . 4/24/2010
love this story !
please write more, i beg you...
| Kharneth666 chapter 4 . 11/29/2009
i have been waiting for a fic like this for quite some time. you did well. continue with the story please.
| Edward95 chapter 4 . 11/23/2009
Great so far and looking foward to more hope you update soon :)
| Saturnblue chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
I find some of the characters name are either very similar to each other or just have the same name as another character. I find Harry's character seem off from how he usually would react to situation as this. Even if he is angry or have any darkness in his heart he won't actually like this so soon. It's like a transformation over night. I think since he have to endure how he acts through the dark lord he can't be his useless self that he was before otherwise how will he be done with his destiny. At least he still maintain some of his innocent or mercy as he continue his conquering path.
The only concern I had for Harry's characterization is his personality that seem to transformed over night like I mention before. Even with your hints of insecurities it still doesn't do justice on his character in general. There's hardly any gradual transformation from how he supposed be before encountering anything different than he used to, to how he acts now in order to do what he needed. It's like there's something missing in his transformation.
Other than that, I personally enjoyed the story as a whole. Nice.
| MercuryPilgrim chapter 4 . 4/8/2009
Nice story! I really like it! But, how on earth (or not as the case may be) did he manage to get so tall? he was a midget in 4th year apparantly and in a year he had grown to 7'2! Thats seriously tall, still magic can explain almost anything! Still, nice story, please continue!
| autumnannette19 chapter 4 . 1/22/2009
Whats next, whats next?
| Lord Magis chapter 4 . 8/6/2008
A fantastic story please upd8 soon
| I-Am-Silence chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
Other than a few spelling mistakes I am enjoying your story so far, please don't abbandon it!