Reviews for On the First Day
thestaganddoe chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
And they got married and had a baby :') Someone hold me.
Floke chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Ow that was very cute!
CasablancaInTheTardis chapter 1 . 4/1/2008

that was lovely and really well written

great stuff :)
mustardgirl1128 chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
AW! I love it! So Christmassy and fluffy! xD

I love how you made Petunia nice! Great job! On my favs, because I am a hopeless romantic and this was written SO well! xD
runningfingers chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
This was pretty good. I thought that it was really interesting how you changed the commonly used idea of Lily being the favorite and Petunia being jealous and flipped it around.
Lady Knight Keladry chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
yay! so cute...happy new year!
stella8h8chang chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Interesting - I never thought of Lily's parents in this light - I usually explain her great capacity to love by assuming they gave her plenty. But I can see where you might be coming from. And looking at the big picture, you've written a wonderfully cute Christmas piece - season's greetings to you too!
serindraxx chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
im sorry that you are sick, but a great story came of it. keep it up!

lilsnjamesy chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
liz22463 chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
aww! LOVED it
mAd4H-p chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
aw that was sweet. Loved it. Very lovely conversations between Lily and James, and I loved how realistic they were not the ott characters some people write them as.

good job
Kira2667 chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
aw, lily's parents are evil. that was so cute and sweet. it's perfect for this time of year.i hope you feel better soon!
Wackysocks chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
and then did they go down and do the snowball fight?

Carlyx chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Aw, this is so sweet.

Happy Christmas!
twouble chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Aw, aw, aw!

Merry Christmas!