|Reviews for Deadly Archer in Sandland|
| Dailey Vengeance chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
cool, story I like this merc. Please contiune writing so that i can hear more of his mission
| mrs.nielson chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
This is an awesome story! I love the clever reference to the men as "suits." The dialogue is awesome! There are a few grammatical errors. If you'd like me to edit it, I can!
Keep writing! You have a talent!
| thestoryteller217 chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
great job on the story u definetly have me interested
| A-Fiasco chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Hey, this is a good start. I like the way you set up the scene. It's been awhile since I've checked the category I ORGINALLY started (under a different pen-name!). I'm glad that you posted your story here and hope that you'll continue writing.