|Reviews for The Benefits of Omnipotence|
| midoka-chan chapter 55 . 3/6
I've found the story very interesting so far. I hope we will ever get more of it.
| Guest chapter 45 . 2/13
I have to say Naruto and Iruka's reunion was very well done.
| sendicard chapter 55 . 1/23
And with the introduction of Gaara this story is done.
Saddening, I was hoping to end on a cliff hanger for especial cruelness. Oh well, not all abandoned stories can end in especially cruel ways, only the truly, extremely, incredibly abandoned ones.
I don't know why you chose to leave this story, but I'm sure your reason was just. Although to be honest, it isn't like you promised you'd finish it or anything... Did you? Nah, I doubt it.
Anyway, have a nice month or so, I'ma go play some games, pass out, read something else. You know, other things.
I guess I'll "follow" the story just encase but, I'm pretty sure that ship has sailed.
| sendicard chapter 54 . 1/23
"After a quick and stealthy bath,"
Stealthy, bath. I repeat, stealthy, bath. The bath was stealthy. Stealth the bath!
No matter what way I say it, I can't get the image of three or four legitimate ninjas, decked out in stereotypical ninja garb; washing each other through the clothes in a silent manner in Iruka's bathroom.
That was pretty cool, poor Naruto. Ruining his cool in such a sad way...
That does sound pretty weird being said out loud. "If for some reason you die, you can report the reason to me."
| Guest chapter 55 . 1/23
This is a great story hope to read more
| sendicard chapter 52 . 1/23
So the main concurrence of this chapter is actually a matter of mystery eh? From what I can tell, if he dies while touching someone, they retain a fragment of that moment burned into their personality. At least, that's what it seems like. Both Sakura and that council member have experienced something like that.
Author's note: Not obligated to finish? Ok. *Walks off into moving train*
| sendicard chapter 51 . 1/23
But sleeping then means his reset has changed. He won't have another chance at Ibiki, nor will he be able to run. Bold move Naruto.
So he's going to be reset to the beginning of the meeting? Poor bastard, then again it had to have been fun making that point. Not that it will stick... Obviously.
| sendicard chapter 49 . 1/22
That chapter was also pretty damn awesome. I thought Naruto couldn't speak of his curse though? Last time he tried he was silenced by the very words.
Always count on Sarutobi to believe him, haha...
| sendicard chapter 48 . 1/22
That, was a powerful scene. The one between Naruto and Jiraya. I... Decided to throw in a review purely to post my opinion on that. That deserves some praise, definitely felt that. I know my praise doesn't mean much to you as I haven't been even a 10th as harsh with this story as I normally am but... Know that it means something to most.
I thank you for allowing me to see and feel that.
| sendicard chapter 47 . 1/22
Those papers mean that much? I'm overly curious, overly.
| sendicard chapter 39 . 1/22
It doesn't go to charity? Then why am I still here? Fuck this, *jumps out window.*
Isn't he like, not going to agree when he wakes up? It isn't like he's honor bound to something agreed to while drugged.. Or what mine as well have been drugged.
So what, it left her the Squirrel contract or something?
| sendicard chapter 36 . 1/22
That's pretty funny. Nice one, you're mean to Naruto as well. Which is even funnier.
| sendicard chapter 35 . 1/22
Oh great, the one time he uses his Chakra and there is no epic reveal or even dramatic situation! *Cries in corner* You're so mean!
Which is fine, if you were nice to me then this story would probably suck. There's a reason I can't write one. I'm a good critic but not a very good writer.
| sendicard chapter 34 . 1/22
All I could think this entire chapter was "He's doing it again! He's going to be with them FOREVER!
You know, I'm still waiting for Naruto to use Kyuubi's chakra for... Something. I don't even care what it is. I'm pretty sure it just isn't happening, but I still can't help but get excited over the possibility every time Naruto fights while exausted.
| sendicard chapter 33 . 1/22
Hinata locked herself in a closet! Haha, holy crap. I couldn't breathe for like 3 seconds after reading that. Not long, but long enough to get that it was damn funny.
Author's note: Wow, you noticed them too? This chapter is like.. The worst i've seen. For instance you stated that Sakura got the message yesterday when she got it today. Betrothal was spelled dramatically wrong. Shit like that, terrible.
I see you're actually interested in knowing of all those typos and such... Wish I had known that. Oh well, too late now. You haven't updated this in years so I'm probably not going to start now. I don't expect it to ever be continued so... Be kind of pointless. Hell it's long ago date was the reason I picked it as a story to wind down on. No need to go all overboard on something written before I even knew how to properly use a comma... probably a bit of an exaggeration but not by too far.