The first few chapters of this fic was a great concept, but this Naruto seems to have lost his brain cells and refused to use any of his future knowledge ever since the wave arc started.

Despite future knowledge, why is this Naruto so pathetic?

that last rule was written because of naruto wanst it?

should i feel concerned i understood th elogic of the kyuubi perfectly? probably not

shit,naruto is basically a god(even tough a lesser one now)... shit is going to be complicated

well,shit,i mean... if you think about it,a bijuudama AWAYS has a small distortion of ligth around it,meaning its soo dense it bends space,and if it bend space then it can bend time for they are connected...

I JUST RELIZED THIS IS AS OLD AS ME BROOOOOO

Common man stop making the story boring.. quit this so called realistic approach.

It was very interesting and fun to read

I stopped reading when naruto was hit by a claw from some low level demon brothers, this man is a time traveler with superior skills and knew what was goanna happen. It’s common sense for him to be prepared and deal with them while protecting his team and yet you write him as if he’s even dumber than he originally was.

loved it up until the kidnapping arc. Been about 10 (15?) chapters since Naruto got kidnapped by zabuza. Not my favourite arc, gotta tell you. Hope you do away with it if/when you go for a rewrite. Perhaps I'm missing something, though. Just feels like the fic is spinning its wheels

Really love the dragon ball z jokes at the end though. Because this feels exactly like Goku talking to freeza for 200 episodes xp

nextttttttt thor

:: It takes a certain luster from the story, you see

While it does, the way you tell it makes it really difficult to see how this guy is repeating time. Most of the time it feels like an altered retelling of the original story - branches, that sort of thing. Arguably, this outcome seems a little worse.

One thing I particularly have a problem with is Kyuubi. Or, rather, pronounced lack thereof.

All in all, it seems more like Naruto found (or was bestowed) a power of Groundhog Day. Which, all things considered, is still pretty awesome... but decidedly *less* than the premise of the story would suggest.

At the very least, I would expect him to have knowledge of better skills. Getting shoved into your thirteen-year-old body without its muscle memory and such would likely be a massive pain, but if *memories* went with him (and they sort of would have to, as your personality isn't its own entity without them), you'd expect jutsu - or the knowledge and ability to talk to Foxie - to tag along.

Serious requirement for suspension of disbelief. Actually, ruined the story for me. Letting the jinchuriki disappear without a search, assuming he's dead. The insubordination from the characters. Great concept, but all of konohona would have been mobilized to find Naruto the second he was overdue.

"He had probably just killed the troubled youth"... Are you stupid?