Reviews for The Benefits of Omnipotence
SaucyHandles chapter 4 . 3/13/2015
Alright I'm four chapters in and it's still pretty boring.
The dark of night5 chapter 55 . 3/3/2015
Hey! I just found your story, although I had heard rumors of it on the net, and I was wondering if you were planning on continuing it. I really hope you do, because it's fantastic, and I really like it!
Either way, great job!
someonesomewhere chapter 55 . 2/24/2015
That was actually good story.

Hope you would like to continue this sometime.
Wildrop chapter 55 . 2/23/2015
This was so much fun to read. It's definitely an original take on the peggy sue time travel concept. I've never seen a peggy sue fic find a way to keep its own continuity like this before. It was brilliant to see. Thank you.
Also, for some reason I absolutely loved the fact that Naruto got kidnapped by Zabuza. I couldn't even tell you why I liked that so much, other than that I guess it's just fun to have an excuse to watch him interact with Zabuza and Haku in a believable way.
The short cycle where he went psycho on the council made a lot of sense to me, too. Sometimes you just gotta vent...
The beginnings of his relationship with Gaara here cute, and (yes I know I use this word too much) fun. Would have loved to see how that played out (Naruto just can't help but make friends, huh? Goooooo Therapy no Jutsu! XD)
Thanks for writing!
Chibi-Kari chapter 55 . 2/10/2015
I clicked story alert just in the off chance you decide you want to continue this. The premise of the story is fantastic! I think the pacing could have been a little better (honestly, I skimmed some parts), but your writing style is a wonderful breath of fresh air compared to most of the stuff here. If you ever decide that you want to continue, I'll be right behind my computer screen loving every minute of it! So thanks for sharing your talent!
D'North chapter 55 . 1/29/2015
great story. i stayed up to 1:30am reading it when i had to b up at 4 for work. please keep writing.
HyperCatnip chapter 55 . 1/18/2015
This fanfic would be okay if it didn't treat time travel with such relaxed attitude.

Time travel is serious business.

First, it is very important to know a trigger for time travel, and get an ability to initiate it at will.
This will save traveler a lot of trouble. Multiple suicide ways may be a good idea.

Second, it is very important to find what causes savepoint to form, and make it so you can create savepoint when you want to (or DON'T create it if saving seems like a bad idea)

Third, most important. This form of time travel allows information to go back in time.
Any information.

Including harmful information, like mind control affecting you, or eldritch knowledge that makes everyone who has it go mad.
So, it is very important to be able to kill yourself when facing even slight possibility of mind control. Here multiple ways to commit suicide will be handy.

But let's not forget for other information. Knowledge that is power.
With time travel, it is trivial to:
* steal forbidden jutsus and learn them (and then die, erasing the event from time, but not your knowledge);
* Test said jutsus to see how well they suit you (and die again, erasing all evidence but your knowledge);
* Find out next day's lottery result and restart your day for serious profit;
* Steal all kinds of secret information and erase evidence;

Time travel is hideously powerful thing. It is an Instant Global Victory Condition if handled correctly.
Once smart person gets hold of time travel, it is game over for all their opponents everywhere forever.
Reading this fanfic was very irritating.
It pains me to see the hero have what amounts to omnipotence and not use it.

However, if this is a story of Naruto slowly figuring the use of time travel as he goes, I apologise.
In that case, this fanfic may yet turn into an awesome epic.

Also, I did read it start to finish. Thanks for writing it, and I wish you
cdog1019 chapter 55 . 12/12/2014
Enjoyed the story, too bad it has been abandoned
Zarkko chapter 55 . 12/8/2014
I found it! Haha! I first read this story way back in '08. I loved it, but seeing as I didn't have a profile on here yet, I simply moved on and forgot about it. And then, just a few hours ago, I remembered it out of the blue and decided I really wanted to read it again. So I tracked it down and just finished it. And it is even better than I remember. Kudos to you. Now, considering it hasn't been updated in 5 years, I'm going to assume it's been abandoned. That sucks, but it's also your choice. Just know, that if you ever want to pick it up again, you have at least one fan who will be very glad to see it.

sing-to-the-moon chapter 55 . 11/28/2014
A fabulous story! I've really enjoyed reading it :)
Ignore the haters;they're full of crap.
All the best, stay fabulous!
c.y.lawless chapter 42 . 10/24/2014
ooh, nice naruto.
Guest chapter 30 . 10/23/2014
They're so out of character, it hurts to just look at it. I mean out of all the people to be devastated, it was Sakura? I actually thought Kakashi would do something since he wouldn't let his sensei's son die or at least retrieve the body. Haku and Zabuza not letting Naruto leave was also dumb as fuck. They shouldn't stay in a place too long and I'm pretty sure Zavuza wouldn't suggest a one-month tutorial with no contact and escape. That's no different from being a prisoner. A debt is not being paid here, it's the exact opposite. The divinity and whatever with kyuubi's just ridiculous as hell with all that 'oh I'm gonna be mysterious cuz I feel like it suck on that host'.
LoganAlexander chapter 8 . 10/22/2014
why in the fuck wouldn't they take a break and eat...fuck this...its stupid as fuck...luckily you never finished the story...
LoganAlexander chapter 7 . 10/22/2014
how in the hell did naruto become dumber, more childish and even more incompetent than the time before...shit I'm giving this story just a few more chapters and I really hope you'll improve the quality
LoganAlexander chapter 5 . 10/22/2014
...uh yeah the kyuubi chakra can heal holes in his chest...da fuck you say it can't heal him from poison.
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